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devduck01 — A Very Bratty Christmas - Part one
Published: 2014-12-23 15:53:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2048; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 92
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Twas the night before Christmas, and the Bratts were at rest
Each enjoying the day in the way they thought best
When Books was disturbed from her scientific proof
By the Jingle of Bells and a thump on the roof
"What can that be?" I best go and see
Though I have no doubt that it's probably Dee
What Books sees does indeed gives her pause
For there on the roof she finds Santa Claus
He mutters and mumbles as he reads from his list
Seems the idea of presents for Dee is dismissed
Art by the Grinch like
Santa is a free agent
Books, Dimples and Sugar Bratt are my oc's and may only be used with permission
To be continued at...
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Comments: 17
Well I am thinking that if Santa isn't careful Nadine will unleash a rather nasty virus that would render his flying reindeer into rather ordinary ground based versions of their former selves. I love the take on the night before Christmas story .. Looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
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Thank you...I am glad ppl enjoy it as the little fun story I meant it to be but note to self...no more attempts at poetry
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I'm liking the poem. I hope Dee gets her Dalum. And How can Nadine not believe in Santa, when I've met (and saved) the jolly old elf?
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Uhm...Nadine is capable of rationalizing any number of strange events
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I think it would be more safer for Santa to let RobotSanta deliver (if there are any 
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Ha ha ha, very true, that would be an epic showdown
I am sure Books and Sugar couldn't care less if he passed by, but poor lil Dee would be heart broken
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If Santa knows what is good for him he'll give Dee her gifts hehe
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You would think so, but it seems he is a bureaucrat, lists for this and lists for that
oh god, even my comments are rhyming now
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Who knew you were a poet...
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not falling for that one hehehe
I am so not...
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Santa doesn't want to end up on the Dee List, that would make many children sad.
Also, meeting Books on the roof at Christmas...now that's a present
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Well, if you are very good, next year who knows
And stay tuned, Santa aint safe yet
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