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Published: 2013-07-19 15:31:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 13900; Favourites: 208; Downloads: 71
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Lauki (Laufey&Loki) comics. Loki the lost prince found his father Laufey, the King of Jotunheim.I can feel their sexual tension...
PS. Thanks to *Tinalbion for correcting few mistakes in my English
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If you had a tumblr, you could of post the other parts thereΒ Β
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Will you continue it? Since you said you wouldn't since it's slashy... ;w;
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OMG. I totally forgot. I don't even know hahah XD
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I do love the story idea, where Laufey encounters his son, and seduces him without knowing Loki is his son.
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HAha. Oh my god, well, good plot. but here he actually revealed that Loki is his offspring XD
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True. Doesn't mean he won't seduce loki later.
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Please tell me there's more to this. LOVE IT!!
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Um, well... there is but unedited and I'm shy to post it here cause it's slashy o\\\o
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love this its amazing is there going to be another panel?
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Thanks! Well there is another page but it's too yaoi-ish so I'm afraid many people are just not into this pairing
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Interesting idea - a comic novel. However, I think comics should be comic. The action you present figure. You do not need to describe it.
Unless you want to write a story with illustrations then the drawings is added.
I believe that if there tkest in frames below the image, everything would be more consistent. You do not need to describe the "ice" while in fackt we see that Loki is surprised because it attacked the ice shards.
Great obarazami you present this story.
Your work is very readable, even emotions as emotions are clear and understandable.
You don't need boxes with text - Β leave only dialogue in cloud.
Technically the work is beautiful! Small but very good quality. I seen the ease with which you are using the line. I can see your skilled and a good eye. Great anatomy and movement of the character. Emotions written on their faces.
Good shot backgrounds, simple and reliable.
I think this comic is really beautiful!
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I knew it. I have pack of Marvel comics and I've checked the style. This is not really comics as it is story with illustration that looks like comics. I just wanted some more poetry and words instead of silent drawings. Maybe next time I'll try real comics, as you advised.
Glad you appreciate it^^
I tried my best with the expressions and motion :3
Thank you for wonderful comment<3
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No problem, my dear
the story with illustrations is also a good idea
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This is just amazing. Why it was not happened in movie like this.
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Yes, why?
They had to make scenes like that!
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I loves it! 
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Oh... well. But Im glad you love it!
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^.^ How could I not? It's beautiful
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Wow!! You did wonderfully on this!!! I love it! And thank you for the shout out
I can't wait to see more!
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My sister said that font is a bit to small... is it?
But anyway I hope you can read it. It's not like super small. A bit small
I'm glad u like it^^
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