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deviantesse94 — SHINee In Weirdland
Published: 2010-10-15 17:43:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 634; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 370
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Description CHAPTER 1

TAEMIN'S POV.

Realizing that the road is straight without anything to deter his way, our driver stepped his foot on the gas pedal. As the van sped forward with a greater velocity, the five of us—Minho, Onew, Jonghyun, Key and I—lurched forward with loud groans escaping our mouths.

"What are you doing? Slow down! We'd get into some real trouble if something happens to these boys!" Our manager chastised our driver shrilly.

"Stop fretting about it. I've got it all under control," assured the driver calmly.

Our manager continued stabbing him with warnings and eventually gave up as our driver remained unperturbed, each word that was fired upon him infiltrated in him. I diverted my attention back to the scenery outside. This vicinity was deserted! So there wasn't any picturesque scene I could feast my eyes upon through the van window except for the vanilla sky high above us.

Out of the blue, something ensnared our attention. An unlined figure whizzed by. Reflexively, our driver the van was then swerved away from its tracks. His action sent our bodies lurching forward again. More groans and moans this time though. Louder, even. A wave of curses and swear words surged out of our manager's mouth and out into the air, free to enter our ears.

Key gasped, "Taemin, close your ears. You're too young for these words!" Jonghyun, who sat beside me, placed his palms around my ears. I just smiled and nodded lightly. Our manager analyzed our conditions quickly as he asked, "Is everyone alright?"

Onew, in reply, presented him with a smile and a thumb-up. "It's all good back here."

"Oh, I need to take a leak!" I exclaimed. All heads turned to me as if urging me to explain more on that. "I've been holding it in for a while," I muttered. Our manager let out a long sigh before giving me the green light.

"But," he added, "don't take too long." I nodded, sprang out of the van and my eyes wildly scrutinized the whole area, searching for a secluded place to—do my business. I started ambling farther from the van until I found that particular place. After taking a few steps forward, my leg felt as if it was being yanked underneath the ground by a strong force. I struggled to stay get back up. Only my head was visible then since the rest of my body had been sucked by that bizarre hole. My cries for help echoed in the vicinity albeit I was not certain whether it reached the ears of the people in the van. I had strolled a bit too far from it. My fingers were clawing the earthy ground, making a miserable attempt at saving myself.

Ultimately, my hands gave up and at once and darkness consumed me; devoured me.
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Comments: 7

uber-neko [2010-10-19 02:44:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm sooooo in love with this story already!! Keep the title and use the Lucifer concept! (I'll love you forever if you make this a horror story, if that's what you're intending) SHINee forever!~<3

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deviantesse94 In reply to uber-neko [2010-10-19 05:37:56 +0000 UTC]

It's a fantasy story though. But who knows if my partners and I would want to insert a little bit of horror in it C:

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uber-neko In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-10-20 01:21:19 +0000 UTC]

umm...if you don't mind me asking, is it ok if i can write the next part? Or have you already thought up of what's gonna happen next? Or someone's doing it already? If not, I'll try to make it entertaining as best as I can. All I need is a little brainstorming, and I'll write the life away!

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deviantesse94 In reply to uber-neko [2010-10-20 05:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Sorry but the positions for the other writers have all been taken

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uber-neko In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-10-21 02:29:35 +0000 UTC]

oh okay. keep on writing the story! I'll keep in touch!

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greeny716 [2010-10-15 19:51:08 +0000 UTC]

I say we stick with Lucifer since that's what we started with, but it doesn't matter to me. Title, again, I don't really care. I'll write next if no one else wants too

I like the beginning, very nice ^_^

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deviantesse94 In reply to greeny716 [2010-10-16 02:28:08 +0000 UTC]

OK. So Minho's POV will be next then C:

Thank you

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