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Published: 2003-12-17 16:50:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 22
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My Body is the battlefield,this cold virus the foe,
the war declaration has been sealed,
from crown of head to little toe
Support the war - get more tools!
multivits and garlic, bye bye dear fools,
So for logistics, I buy vitamin c,
soon the army of virus shall be leaving me
Take THAT! Foul virii,
Taste the swords of water,
you shall not see this night,
as I bomb you with vitamin mortar.
Go, brave antibodies, be strong
with this much support, you will not need fight long
Show no mercy to those foul antigen,
Engulf and swarm them, my little men!
For death and glory,
with no surrender, and no retreat,
we will fight them some surely,
and never again shall we meet.
To war!
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Comments: 5
davidrussell [2004-03-20 01:18:23 +0000 UTC]
You can buy Battlefield Vietnam off of me if you like.
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Denyyourself [2003-12-23 00:34:16 +0000 UTC]
Go Jack!
Ace poem. And it didn't have some insanely depressing touch on it. Nor any angst. Nothing to spoil it I guess.
Ace.
JJ
\o\
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deviantjack In reply to Denyyourself [2003-12-23 10:28:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks JJ - you rock, dude.!
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deviantkupo [2003-12-17 16:54:17 +0000 UTC]
Fight on, body, fight on!
An amusing poem, Jack-chan!
You should consider reading your poem aloud, it'll help sort out a more regular pace, something I think you could do with \o/
Hooray yayayaaaaay.
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