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**NOTE**
This story is of my imagination and the character that is added on here is not from the current My little pony fan fiction "Rainbow Factory" it is my fan made character which is very unique. If you want to know more about this character I will show you a profile soon. In the mean time enjoy my story since it's a nice story with a nice ending (no gore, blood, etc.). And it's 20% cooler . Also very long
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I.Regret
Cold hearted Rainbow Dash looked at Scootaloo then something snapped "YES, YES! What I wanted all along!!! Good job my puppet MUHAHAHAHAHH!!!" the mysterious said. Then it became familiar to her, "WHAT?! YOU LET THIS HAPPEN TO ME? DISCORD!? HOW COULD-" she cut herself off after she that angrily. Discord shocked at this said "Darn your so tricky kid! I almost perfectly took control of you!!" Rainbow Dash couldn't believe this and she felt truly terrible.

II.Hero Arises!
Just then I Razor Green opened the door then destroyed the factory with magic and flew Rainbow Dash out of there then I revived everyone that died in that factory including Scootaloo. She cried really hard and I said "Quit crying I revive Scootaloo and the others that were killed in the factory!" Rainbow Dash saw this was true and want to make Discord to pay for all this but I still sense some evil left in her. She bit my freaking wing and that explains it but I used my magically floating bubble so she never escapes unless I release it then we came to a safe place then when Scootaloo caught up with us I explained everything to her and she understood. I said with a smile "I'll keep watch!". "I don't get, just how umm..." said Scootaloo confused. I replied "Razor, the king of the night and part pegasi, unicorn, and earth pony!". Rainbow Dash was shocked about this and said "Wait what?!, YOUR THE HUSBAND OF LUNA?!" then she bowed down to me and I replied "Yes and thats why I destroy that dreadful factory and made the evil ones run for their lives before I destroyed it then after I revived everybody that was killed there I teleported them except for Scootaloo to a place where no one will hurt or find them. I made the evil ones run for their lives HA HA! Also thats why I saved you dashie!" then I grinned at her. "But that doesn't change the fact that were-" I know where this was gonna go so I had to take action and yell in her face by grabbing her and said "LOYALTY IS NOT JUST TWO PEOPLE YOU COLD-STONED WITCH!! IT INCLUDES YOUR PEOPLE THAT YOU CARE AND LOVE FOR, THAT MEANS THERE ARE NO LIMITS!!!!! YOU MADE A TERRIBLE MISTAKE YOU TWO TIME TRAITOR PSYCHOPATH!!!!! YOU DID THE MOST VILE CRIME IN EQUESTRIA EVER!!!!!! BEING LOYAL ALSO MEANS STICKING WITH YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY AND NOT BETRAYING THEM ESPECIALLY YOUR PEOPLE THAT YOU TRULY LOVE!!!!!" I was furiously crying after that. Then I heard something that I wanted to make her wish that she never saw the light of day again, "I DONT GIVE A CRAP...." luckily I can control these feelings. Calmly I said "You got to care because I can make it up to you and I will clear your name!" Then a miracle happened she cried... Yes she cried so hard that I felt that huge suffering coming at her left and right then she confessed like any good person would do "Yes, I made that terrible mistake but I knew that it seemed like Discord made Princess Celestia say those things, And I was right, I let loyalty took control of my life, and your right that's the truth about loyalty. I should have known better! I AM EXTREMELY SORRY!"

III.Discord's Doom
I raised my head then I said "How can I-" just then storm crackles, this is got to be Discord and not a mile away I see that dreadful evil in front of me. He looked pretty pissed off "YOU RUINED EVERYTHING I PLANNED, NOW YOU PAY WITH YOUR LIFE!!" then I had no choice but to defeat him; however, Rainbow Dash is still evil but I have no choice but to extract something like a demon that somehow entered her body and soul. Something clicked then I thought, Wait... that demon is oddly familiar, Ah hah! Mr.Unknown they call him luckily the grip of Discord's "Puppeting" made it VERY strongly influential on Dashie but luckily thats over. I must do that extraction first "O wind Here, I need not worry about scorching the earth! EXCALIBUR!!!!!" A silver glowing yellow blade shown as soon as I got my golden epic armor on. Then I stabbed Rainbow Dash and extracted the demon successfuly besides it was the only way or I have to do the more painful way. However he instantly fused with Discord, uh-oh HOLY CRAP UNEXPECTED MUFFIN!!! GODZILLA DISCORD AHHHHHH!!!!! Rainbow Dash got much younger then I thought, whew that was expected. Then I said "Until Dashie admits the deeper meaning of loyalty, and you can negoitate a solution that is truly good for you and others and thats what she would have done. She can't be back to her actual age ever until she admits it!" Dashie friends arrived then I told them everything then they were truly shocked. Then Rainbow Dash admits it all I said before about loyalty then she became back to normal and back with her element of harmony. Then Twilight Sparkle said "So basically we have to fuse to beat this guy?" I was like WHAT?! "Twilight how the heck you knew that?" "Mind reading spell, so I'm making sure you weren't lieing and betraying us. So your totally cool!" She said with a sinister smile, jeez thats so creepy! So we put our plan in action, I was still me but with their subconciouses and their powers. I can basically can do anything to any other of people of my kind since I have experience. The elements of harmony were built into Excalibur then I fired a huge yellow blast but Discord fired a powerful but small blast and we struggled and struggled but suddenly I heard "BASS CANNON!" in my head, then we had advantage with that added power thanks to Vinyl Scratch that somehow fused with us. But then I realized something, I needed a lot more strength than that "PONIES YOUR FINAL FORMS LIKE CHANGE IN FORM. REMEMBER WHEN TWILIGHT WAS IN A RAGE AND SHE TURNED INTO A FLAMING BODY? WELL THATS THE ONLY WAY YOU CAN WIN AND I CAN DO THAT!!!!" then we did what we did (Twilight's rage form, Rainbow Dashes Phoenix Form, Pinkie Pie's straight hair but it was filled with ballons oddly, Fluttershy's was a butterfly, Rarity was a Diamond body, and Apple jacks was a apple tree form.) and we became victorious!

IV.Epilogue
Thus everything turned back to normal and Princess Celestia came out of nowhere and crowned me the true hero of friendship. After that ordeal Scootaloo and Orion got another chance at their test and passed. Apparently things turned to the worse when Discord was around (and thats just cruel ). "All bad things to an end permantly and justice will be served for the truly right and corruption will renew into hope. And thy evil shall lose every case once the truth is always found. Evil never brings what you want and loyalty shouldn't be loyal IF the situation has a solution that is 100% cruel and immoral. Its not practical at all and it's best to refuse and do what's truly right and don't let evil deeds win ever. Don't let things take you too suriously and control your emotions and don't let emotions take control of your life. Think before you act and betrayl will always lead anybody into an unbearable hot hell." I told Celestia that and she was amazed and realized that she can't do decisions that will put the ponies at risk, especially animals. All ended well
The End!

:D (Big Grin) — Description
**NOTE**
This story is of my imagination and the character that is added on here is not from the current My little pony fan fiction "Rainbow Factory" it is my fan made character which is very unique. If you want to know more about this character I will show you a profile soon. In the mean time enjoy my story since it's a nice story with a nice ending (no gore, blood, etc.). And it's 20% cooler . Also very long
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I.Regret
Cold hearted Rainbow Dash looked at Scootaloo then something snapped "YES, YES! What I wanted all along!!! Good job my puppet MUHAHAHAHAHH!!!" the mysterious said. Then it became familiar to her, "WHAT?! YOU LET THIS HAPPEN TO ME? DISCORD!? HOW COULD-" she cut herself off after she that angrily. Discord shocked at this said "Darn your so tricky kid! I almost perfectly took control of you!!" Rainbow Dash couldn't believe this and she felt truly terrible.

II.Hero Arises!
Just then I Razor Green opened the door then destroyed the factory with magic and flew Rainbow Dash out of there then I revived everyone that died in that factory including Scootaloo. She cried really hard and I said "Quit crying I revive Scootaloo and the others that were killed in the factory!" Rainbow Dash saw this was true and want to make Discord to pay for all this but I still sense some evil left in her. She bit my freaking wing and that explains it but I used my magically floating bubble so she never escapes unless I release it then we came to a safe place then when Scootaloo caught up with us I explained everything to her and she understood. I said with a smile "I'll keep watch!". "I don't get, just how umm..." said Scootaloo confused. I replied "Razor, the king of the night and part pegasi, unicorn, and earth pony!". Rainbow Dash was shocked about this and said "Wait what?!, YOUR THE HUSBAND OF LUNA?!" then she bowed down to me and I replied "Yes and thats why I destroy that dreadful factory and made the evil ones run for their lives before I destroyed it then after I revived everybody that was killed there I teleported them except for Scootaloo to a place where no one will hurt or find them. I made the evil ones run for their lives HA HA! Also thats why I saved you dashie!" then I grinned at her. "But that doesn't change the fact that were-" I know where this was gonna go so I had to take action and yell in her face by grabbing her and said "LOYALTY IS NOT JUST TWO PEOPLE YOU COLD-STONED WITCH!! IT INCLUDES YOUR PEOPLE THAT YOU CARE AND LOVE FOR, THAT MEANS THERE ARE NO LIMITS!!!!! YOU MADE A TERRIBLE MISTAKE YOU TWO TIME TRAITOR PSYCHOPATH!!!!! YOU DID THE MOST VILE CRIME IN EQUESTRIA EVER!!!!!! BEING LOYAL ALSO MEANS STICKING WITH YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY AND NOT BETRAYING THEM ESPECIALLY YOUR PEOPLE THAT YOU TRULY LOVE!!!!!" I was furiously crying after that. Then I heard something that I wanted to make her wish that she never saw the light of day again, "I DONT GIVE A CRAP...." luckily I can control these feelings. Calmly I said "You got to care because I can make it up to you and I will clear your name!" Then a miracle happened she cried... Yes she cried so hard that I felt that huge suffering coming at her left and right then she confessed like any good person would do "Yes, I made that terrible mistake but I knew that it seemed like Discord made Princess Celestia say those things, And I was right, I let loyalty took control of my life, and your right that's the truth about loyalty. I should have known better! I AM EXTREMELY SORRY!"

III.Discord's Doom
I raised my head then I said "How can I-" just then storm crackles, this is got to be Discord and not a mile away I see that dreadful evil in front of me. He looked pretty pissed off "YOU RUINED EVERYTHING I PLANNED, NOW YOU PAY WITH YOUR LIFE!!" then I had no choice but to defeat him; however, Rainbow Dash is still evil but I have no choice but to extract something like a demon that somehow entered her body and soul. Something clicked then I thought, Wait... that demon is oddly familiar, Ah hah! Mr.Unknown they call him luckily the grip of Discord's "Puppeting" made it VERY strongly influential on Dashie but luckily thats over. I must do that extraction first "O wind Here, I need not worry about scorching the earth! EXCALIBUR!!!!!" A silver glowing yellow blade shown as soon as I got my golden epic armor on. Then I stabbed Rainbow Dash and extracted the demon successfuly besides it was the only way or I have to do the more painful way. However he instantly fused with Discord, uh-oh HOLY CRAP UNEXPECTED MUFFIN!!! GODZILLA DISCORD AHHHHHH!!!!! Rainbow Dash got much younger then I thought, whew that was expected. Then I said "Until Dashie admits the deeper meaning of loyalty, and you can negoitate a solution that is truly good for you and others and thats what she would have done. She can't be back to her actual age ever until she admits it!" Dashie friends arrived then I told them everything then they were truly shocked. Then Rainbow Dash admits it all I said before about loyalty then she became back to normal and back with her element of harmony. Then Twilight Sparkle said "So basically we have to fuse to beat this guy?" I was like WHAT?! "Twilight how the heck you knew that?" "Mind reading spell, so I'm making sure you weren't lieing and betraying us. So your totally cool!" She said with a sinister smile, jeez thats so creepy! So we put our plan in action, I was still me but with their subconciouses and their powers. I can basically can do anything to any other of people of my kind since I have experience. The elements of harmony were built into Excalibur then I fired a huge yellow blast but Discord fired a powerful but small blast and we struggled and struggled but suddenly I heard "BASS CANNON!" in my head, then we had advantage with that added power thanks to Vinyl Scratch that somehow fused with us. But then I realized something, I needed a lot more strength than that "PONIES YOUR FINAL FORMS LIKE CHANGE IN FORM. REMEMBER WHEN TWILIGHT WAS IN A RAGE AND SHE TURNED INTO A FLAMING BODY? WELL THATS THE ONLY WAY YOU CAN WIN AND I CAN DO THAT!!!!" then we did what we did (Twilight's rage form, Rainbow Dashes Phoenix Form, Pinkie Pie's straight hair but it was filled with ballons oddly, Fluttershy's was a butterfly, Rarity was a Diamond body, and Apple jacks was a apple tree form.) and we became victorious!

IV.Epilogue
Thus everything turned back to normal and Princess Celestia came out of nowhere and crowned me the true hero of friendship. After that ordeal Scootaloo and Orion got another chance at their test and passed. Apparently things turned to the worse when Discord was around (and thats just cruel ). "All bad things to an end permantly and justice will be served for the truly right and corruption will renew into hope. And thy evil shall lose every case once the truth is always found. Evil never brings what you want and loyalty shouldn't be loyal IF the situation has a solution that is 100% cruel and immoral. Its not practical at all and it's best to refuse and do what's truly right and don't let evil deeds win ever. Don't let things take you too suriously and control your emotions and don't let emotions take control of your life. Think before you act and betrayl will always lead anybody into an unbearable hot hell." I told Celestia that and she was amazed and realized that she can't do decisions that will put the ponies at risk, especially animals. All ended well
The End!