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devikafernando — too good by-nd
Published: 2007-10-10 05:17:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 74; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Too good


Like stainless steel, bulletproof glass
Like newly polished copper and brass
Like an elegantly shaped flower vase
Like a neatly trimmed lawn of grass
You're too good
This decisive bit too good to be true

Like the ebony and ivory of piano keys
Like the endless blue of the seven seas
Like the sweetest honey made by bees
Like a climate with only pleasant degrees
You're too good
This derisive bit too good to be true

Like pearlwhite teeth, sparkling eyes
Like a newborn baby who never cries
Like a stream of water that never dries
Like a futuristic new all-round device
You're too good
This decisive bit too good to be true

Like the whitest or darkest chocolate bar
Like silky skin without the slightest scar
Like a stylish eco-friendly really fast car
Like modern art, creative, not too bizarre
You're too good
This derisive bit too good to be true

You're better than best by far
Tougher than tough, not rougher than rough
The most rewarding extra bonus stuff
Dare I say perfect – I don't
Will I be complaining – I won't
You're just too good to be true
Must take my eyes off you
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Comments: 2

robert-kim-karen [2007-11-08 22:13:08 +0000 UTC]

What a rich pallette of words.

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devikafernando In reply to robert-kim-karen [2007-11-09 06:15:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much, my friend!

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