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Published: 2009-10-04 14:51:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 669; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 17
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KimRaiFan [2009-10-05 07:42:40 +0000 UTC]

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This one is a very nice and original, even tought is actually a revamp.
The hands are very well positioned, and if you ask me, the emote looks just like a paranoid.The shading is very improved from the original e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="23" height="15" alt="" title="They're all out to get me..." />. Yet, it could be better. At the moment it looks a bit flat.But it is pretty, the colour of the body fits the colour of the outline really well.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

On a second path the eyes are moving a bit fast. And this fast motion is taking away alot from the "paranoid feeling" the piece gives. You shouldn't have chosen "do not dispose" instead of "restore to background"/"dispose". I personally recommend peopel to use "do not dispose" when they animate an emote on a background, because it makes the animation look smoother. Yet, it doesn't work here.
But if you really wanna keep it, you should totally change the timeline. If you choose "restore to background" you don't need to change it too dramatically. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/i/i… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Slow" />
Again, grats on making an awesome revamp!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap" />

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Long critique is long.

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Devil-man-josh In reply to KimRaiFan [2009-10-05 15:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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KimRaiFan In reply to Devil-man-josh [2009-10-05 16:07:55 +0000 UTC]

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bluedragoneye [2009-10-05 13:11:24 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Devil-man-josh In reply to bluedragoneye [2009-10-05 15:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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bluedragoneye In reply to Devil-man-josh [2009-10-05 19:12:09 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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MixedMilkChOcOlate [2009-10-04 18:40:10 +0000 UTC]

really good revamp

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Devil-man-josh In reply to MixedMilkChOcOlate [2009-10-04 18:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Ellyrox59 [2009-10-04 15:08:16 +0000 UTC]

I Like it, i love the expression! it should be used instead of the first one. its much better

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Devil-man-josh In reply to Ellyrox59 [2009-10-04 15:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Ellyrox59 In reply to Devil-man-josh [2009-10-04 15:10:58 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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dylrocks95 [2009-10-04 14:54:20 +0000 UTC]

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Devil-man-josh In reply to dylrocks95 [2009-10-04 14:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Yush

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dylrocks95 In reply to Devil-man-josh [2009-10-04 15:02:22 +0000 UTC]

indeed

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