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devildog126 β Takeru Fully Armored
Published: 2006-11-24 08:15:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 838; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 21
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This is Takeru in his full armor. His uit has become a darker red, and his hair is alot longer. Also the background is a little crappy since i drew it with a mouse. For a digital pic I kinda like this one. It's different. I really wish i had a tablet. There's alot more in this pic than in usual ones. I like the sunset though. It's probably my favorite feature.There is still alot i need to practice, but please criticize.
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thanx
that actually was my plan (to redo it)
eventually i will get to that
school kinda roolz me right now
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haha I know that feeling!
Today starts my Winter Break. WOOT! What about you?
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yea mine too!
it's a great feelin
i get to draw, drum, and be free!
something that never happens
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lol I agree! =]
Well have fun on your winter break.
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I like how you've drawn all the armour, and the details on the cape in particular. Nice touch with the billowing material on the sword too. The folds in the outfit work out very well in this picture too. I like the way the reddish sky was coloured too.
I think the ground and hills in the background would look a bit better if you used a wider variety of shades and built them up a bit like a painting, using the textures of ground/rocks to add highlights and shadows. The actual lighting on it so far matches up to the light source though. I particularly like the touch with the skull in the corner as it accounts for his shadow.
I think a bit of the problem with the stance (aside from weight distribution) is that his right thigh [our left] is a bit too long compared to the other leg, and it might help if they'd been a slight curve of his buttock.
I hope that helps out a bit; it is a cool picture and definitely shows promise.
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thank u, i really appreciate the comment and criticism.
that really helps me. I kinda got lazy on the background and should have spent alot more time on it. It might have been easier with a tablet considering i had to draw the whole background with a mouse. But u explained wat i did wrong very well and i will work on that.
Again, Thank u
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i agree with danny, his stance and the physics behind it seem kinda outta wack.maybe he could be more heavily leaning on the sword to distribute his weight more evenly...
the torn fabric and folds look really nice.
i need to pracice those darn folds. . .they make my pieces sucky......agh.
nice job!
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this is really goood
1 thing tho:his stance-the weight distribution seems off a little, as if his left leg almost isnt neccesary 4 him 2 stand
im not sure tho it culd just b that im a moron
its a really kool pic tho this is def. a fav.
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i can understand where you're coming from, i kinda noticed that.
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still tho that small mistake is way out-weighed by the good stuff
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not according to clare
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o wow really
heh i thought i was just bein a dumbass and completely clueless about wut i was saying
okie dokie then^^lol
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