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devildragonofhell — through time and space
Published: 2003-11-30 22:22:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description Through time and space         
You can’t find a place         

You try to awake        
But there is no help for heavens sake                    

You want to rest      
You think it would be the best          

You think about life         
Then you remember the knife           

Holding it in your hand              
Trying to stand             

Then you think it is a joke         
Then you see your veins broke           

You want to die      
But you don’t know why          

You’re floating through the air               
You try to call but no ones there                 

You remember the fun           
You hate it that it could all be done                     

You hear a beeping            
Then you realize that you are just sleeping                                  

Your clock is going off
Then you start to cough

You think about your mom  
She calls on the intercom

You run down stairs
She runs her fingers through your hairs

You give her a kiss
And she asks what is wrong little miss

You tell her nothing
Then the egg timer dings

You ask what is up with the timer
Then you smell primer

So here’ s the lesson
Don’t go messin


Or playing with knives
Until you think of the impact it will have on others lives
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Comments: 14

LostTrust [2003-12-07 23:53:15 +0000 UTC]

that is awsome i love it! its definantly a fav for me too! yeah i agree with morgan. i hate it when ppl mess with my hair too! its so annoying but yeah A+!!! woo!

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devildragonofhell In reply to LostTrust [2003-12-08 12:17:40 +0000 UTC]

thanx i found a new icon that i am claiming

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darkhellian [2003-12-01 01:49:42 +0000 UTC]

wow! im at a loss for words... breathtaking. very moving. emotional. A+ actually. Hehe.... very same pposition i have been in many times. except for the mum part. my mum is not like that. i hate it when people feel my hair. yuck. well n e ways nice work marshall...

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devildragonofhell In reply to darkhellian [2003-12-01 21:36:21 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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6d617474 [2003-11-30 22:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Excelent, i love how it ticks on, with refrences to time and different places of mind, really gets the message across well and ads to the theme, you tackle the subject very well, great work.

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devildragonofhell In reply to 6d617474 [2003-12-01 21:38:19 +0000 UTC]

thannx it was off the to of my head

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psycholoser63 [2003-11-30 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]

wow this is great. this is diffently a fav for me. great job!!!

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devildragonofhell In reply to psycholoser63 [2003-12-01 21:39:53 +0000 UTC]

thanx that is the one i told y7ou about

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psycholoser63 In reply to devildragonofhell [2003-12-02 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]

yup i figured. i love this poem tho good job.

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devildragonofhell In reply to psycholoser63 [2003-12-02 12:12:21 +0000 UTC]

thanx i thought of it when i was helping kate on a poem she was working on

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psycholoser63 In reply to devildragonofhell [2003-12-02 22:02:56 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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devildragonofhell In reply to psycholoser63 [2003-12-03 12:10:27 +0000 UTC]

ok

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dav3 [2003-11-30 22:23:52 +0000 UTC]

great art ! !

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devildragonofhell In reply to dav3 [2003-12-01 21:40:52 +0000 UTC]

tyhanx

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