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Published: 2003-11-30 22:22:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Through time and spaceYou can’t find a place
You try to awake
But there is no help for heavens sake
You want to rest
You think it would be the best
You think about life
Then you remember the knife
Holding it in your hand
Trying to stand
Then you think it is a joke
Then you see your veins broke
You want to die
But you don’t know why
You’re floating through the air
You try to call but no ones there
You remember the fun
You hate it that it could all be done
You hear a beeping
Then you realize that you are just sleeping
Your clock is going off
Then you start to cough
You think about your mom
She calls on the intercom
You run down stairs
She runs her fingers through your hairs
You give her a kiss
And she asks what is wrong little miss
You tell her nothing
Then the egg timer dings
You ask what is up with the timer
Then you smell primer
So here’ s the lesson
Don’t go messin
Or playing with knives
Until you think of the impact it will have on others lives
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Comments: 14
LostTrust [2003-12-07 23:53:15 +0000 UTC]
that is awsome i love it! its definantly a fav for me too! yeah i agree with morgan. i hate it when ppl mess with my hair too! its so annoying but yeah A+!!! woo!
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devildragonofhell In reply to LostTrust [2003-12-08 12:17:40 +0000 UTC]
thanx i found a new icon that i am claiming
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darkhellian [2003-12-01 01:49:42 +0000 UTC]
wow! im at a loss for words... breathtaking. very moving. emotional. A+ actually. Hehe.... very same pposition i have been in many times. except for the mum part. my mum is not like that. i hate it when people feel my hair. yuck. well n e ways nice work marshall...
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6d617474 [2003-11-30 22:46:22 +0000 UTC]
Excelent, i love how it ticks on, with refrences to time and different places of mind, really gets the message across well and ads to the theme, you tackle the subject very well, great work.
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devildragonofhell In reply to 6d617474 [2003-12-01 21:38:19 +0000 UTC]
thannx it was off the to of my head
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psycholoser63 [2003-11-30 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]
wow this is great. this is diffently a fav for me. great job!!!
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devildragonofhell In reply to psycholoser63 [2003-12-01 21:39:53 +0000 UTC]
thanx that is the one i told y7ou about
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psycholoser63 In reply to devildragonofhell [2003-12-02 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]
yup i figured. i love this poem tho good job.
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devildragonofhell In reply to psycholoser63 [2003-12-02 12:12:21 +0000 UTC]
thanx i thought of it when i was helping kate on a poem she was working on
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