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Raine-de-Mer [2006-10-21 05:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, long enough for me.

Btw, in US authors are payed for each word, in Germany for each site. How much would you earn for this pointed text in Australia?

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peppermint981 [2003-11-26 22:02:01 +0000 UTC]

sometimes something short can have a lot more meaning than something long and drawn out. This is perfect and beautiful.

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preppie16 [2003-11-25 07:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Great job with this! love it

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mech61 [2003-11-17 08:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Its great and things dont have to be a certain length to be a poem . This is soo poetic and saaaad . Hey speaking of missing people I miss you!

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o-portista [2003-11-04 19:06:22 +0000 UTC]

i think it's really hard to express a feeling like that with so few words
you're a genious! perhaps that's a bit of an exageration due to the fact that i relate so much to it
yep, short is fine, tho i kinda miss the lack of a picture , like some windy scene


no1 know better than me how much you need those

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purplrain [2003-10-29 14:28:27 +0000 UTC]

naah short is fine.. it reflects all ure feelingss
yeah it sure is sad to miss someone when they are gone

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suspended-soul [2003-10-28 10:29:54 +0000 UTC]

I like how its short but it tells a story... you know? does that even make sense? well i hope so... like halfway2nowhere said its "strait" to the point!!

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flamingcatnip [2003-10-16 13:02:00 +0000 UTC]

OOh Me like. Its short and simple but the point is very clear and is not hard to find

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sweetlildevil [2003-10-15 18:51:19 +0000 UTC]

I think .. no.. I know I love it.. it is very true..everyone sort of denies that love hurts...but some of us know the truth with that

-Jenny

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Arkaizer [2003-10-15 02:47:06 +0000 UTC]

Well... if you look at my poems..and how short they are... I think yours surpasses mine just a bit... =\

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braceletsofsmoke [2003-10-14 14:14:38 +0000 UTC]

its short, and to the point. i think that it works well, and i have nothing bad to say about this. great poem

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ChaoticDreams [2003-10-14 10:58:04 +0000 UTC]

I like it its easy to relate to!

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diabolicalfaerie [2003-10-14 10:00:10 +0000 UTC]

actually, i think the 3rd line being longer works witht he flow. it makes it work better.

nice work, perhaps this can be one to work on? if it was longer, it would make a good poem! but still, good.

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halfway2nowhere [2003-10-14 08:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Short, simple and "straight" to the point, nice. I'm not sure about the third line though, it seems to be a little too long when compared to the others and interupts the flow a bit, but apart from that i love it!

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herzurcness [2003-10-14 07:19:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...well, it could be better longer, but it's really nice the way it is..guess it's up to you

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