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devilmaycryub — When I'll Be gone by

Published: 2008-11-16 18:51:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 934; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 17
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Description In Far or distant Future,
Or in the days too much near,
When i will not be here,
Please do not let my grave spare ...

Just come to my grace there,
And sprinkle your tears,
Do not go back just because of fear,
To my unaudioable voice you must hear...

I must be waiting for you,
For my relations that were true,
I will be hearing you too,
But will never say harsh words to you ...

Just talk to me for making me happy,
Remember me as a gone friend,
A friend who was crazy,
A friend who was fun ...

Remember my habbits a little bit crimsy,
Use to disturb you when you were busy,
Use to lighten up your mood when you were dismay,
Just do remember me once for the sake of remembering ...




was sitting at my grandfathers grave ... thinking that death is certain so what would happen when i die ? ... will people come to my grave like i come to his grave ... I know my family occasionaly would but what about my friends ? what about the people i love the most ? will they come ? Am i worth remembering ? And other stupid thoughts came up my mind ... so just wrote this ... WILL YOU MISS ME ? WHEN I`ll BE GONE ?


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© Ubaid Ullah Ahmed
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Comments: 13

sheikhrouf23 [2010-01-28 16:14:38 +0000 UTC]

very well done! like it

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devilmaycryub In reply to sheikhrouf23 [2010-01-29 05:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

this one's close to my heart

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sheikhrouf23 In reply to devilmaycryub [2010-01-29 13:06:34 +0000 UTC]

u r welcome

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Soul-Reader [2008-12-16 16:41:59 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful I love the colours in it

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devilmaycryub In reply to Soul-Reader [2008-12-17 07:29:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks ... read the poem with it ... i wrote that too !!

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Soul-Reader In reply to devilmaycryub [2008-12-17 16:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Okay

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devilmaycryub In reply to Soul-Reader [2008-12-17 19:29:40 +0000 UTC]

!!

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Beachinmama [2008-11-18 05:08:34 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!!!

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devilmaycryub In reply to Beachinmama [2008-11-18 05:52:07 +0000 UTC]

this is the best comment till now !!

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fahadkhan [2008-11-17 17:49:33 +0000 UTC]

i think no ..

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devilmaycryub In reply to fahadkhan [2008-11-18 02:57:49 +0000 UTC]

tum sey umeed toh waisey yeh hi hai !!

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fahadkhan In reply to devilmaycryub [2008-11-18 08:11:27 +0000 UTC]



chal ab serious t na hu yar

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devilmaycryub In reply to fahadkhan [2008-11-18 15:38:40 +0000 UTC]

toh aur kya houn ...

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