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Published: 2005-11-25 04:56:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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We have sowed the seeds of hateWe have sealed our fate
With all our nuclear bombs
Each manned with their own drone
I once had a dream
Ab out the grand scheme
And we're all gonna die
Everyone chose to fry
We burned our spot all the way to our graves
We're nothing that heaven can even save
We all made the choice
There will be but one that will rejoice
The one you sopld your soul to
The one you serve an eternity to
He is your master
All through the ever after
He is the winner
Because you are the quitter
You drank till you dropped
You snorted till you flopped
You shot up
To shoot down
Ply straight into the ground
You never thought much of yourself
Always felt by yourself
Now you burn in Hell
And you think some one tripped and you fell
I'll tell you there's a better place
But not for the human race
Heaven is out of your reach
Hell you have breached
This is you consequence
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Comments: 9
Wow! These words are amazing! The way you contrast and compare things is really... really good.
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thanks...i guess...?
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OMFG i love this poem, it seems to fit perfectly with a comic im planning...the character, named "consequence" is a man in a post-apocalyptic world trying to salvage the dignity of the human race. anyways this poem makes me happy FAVE!... but whenevr you get time i'd check the spelling. absolutely great use of language though!
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yea, my spelling isn't the best, but at least i get the point across. you can us this poem in the comic if you want, i just want a copy and credit
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if use it, ill make sure to let you know~!
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You seem like a pessimistic guy, or either sadistically optimistic. lol
"And you think some one tripped and you fell" <--- nice line
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some little gramamr errors but its a good poem! i like it. good ideas.
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