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Published: 2004-03-04 03:28:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 38
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I’m tired of doing all you doI’m tired of walking in your shoes.
I’m tired of trusting
Trusting in you.
I’m tired of waiting for you all day
I’m tired of the lies that you say.
I’m tired of listening
Listening to you.
I’m tired of being just like you
I’m tired of doing nothing new.
I’m tired of thinking
Thinking of you.
You’re on my mind
You’re in my heart
You’re all I see
But with you
I’m never free.
Fry my mind
Cut out my heart
Tear out my eyes
Rid me of the lies!
Die
Die
Die!
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Comments: 15
devilskitten In reply to Jomina [2004-04-30 20:07:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much. Im glad you like it.
~Ciao
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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-03-07 06:48:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Means a lot to me. Thanks so much.
~Ciao
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night-symphony In reply to devilskitten [2004-03-08 03:38:11 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome no prob
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guacharro [2004-03-04 14:36:48 +0000 UTC]
Something about this one.....can't put my finger on it.... but I like it, a lot. One of my favorites.
~Bird
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devilskitten In reply to guacharro [2004-03-04 22:17:05 +0000 UTC]
Hey thanks. When you put ur finger on what it is about the poem, let me know. Im glad you like it.
Thanks
~Ciao
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guacharro In reply to devilskitten [2004-03-05 02:21:48 +0000 UTC]
It describes how I feel a lot of the time....I think it's that I relate to it. Maybe.....I dunno...I like it though.
~Bird
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darkestayngel [2004-03-04 03:33:48 +0000 UTC]
Haha beautiful but I already knew that Well... you know what I have to say about it but I figure I'll say it again. Wonderfully beautiful. Well written, I like the style with the repetition of some words. It seems almost lyrical you can put a very good beat to it. It sings to me. And my blood. Sings to blood. A song for blood... ahhhh...
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~*~Love from an Ayngel~*~
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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-03-04 03:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Hey hun. Thanks. I know you like it. Cause you read my work before I put it in. Haha. And Im glad that it sings to you. I began yo write it when the song "Numb" but Linkin Park came on. And it kinda sounds a little lyrical. Im glad you like it and that it sings to you blood.
~Ciao
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hidden8707 [2004-03-04 03:33:42 +0000 UTC]
This is an ass-kicker! Nothing like a good ol' bitter poem that just makes me happy... in a, um, bitter way, I mean.
"Enough" is great!
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devilskitten In reply to hidden8707 [2004-03-04 03:37:51 +0000 UTC]
Hey thanks. Im glads that you like it and that it makes you happy in a bitter way. Thanks a lot.
~Ciao
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BloodyTemptress [2004-03-04 03:30:49 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, The picture causes my obsessive blood to awaken, but the poem adds perfect grace to it. Not my usual style, but I like it. It shows emotion.
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devilskitten In reply to BloodyTemptress [2004-03-04 03:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the comment. Im glad you like it. I love the pic as well.
~Ciao
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