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devilskitten — Flames
Published: 2004-01-30 19:15:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 33
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Screaming for lifeGasping for air.
Crying to the flame
That will burn you bare.
Strips off your clothes
Singes you hair.
Scolds your skin
While you gasp for air.
Traps you inside.
Burns you to oblivion.
Rips the flesh
From your bones.
Your spirit soars out
As your bones crumble to ash.
And your eyes make the last
Final flash.
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Comments: 13
Hey thanks for all the favs and the comments. Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you. Just been busy and not on the computer much lately. But thanks again. I'm glad you like them.
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it's ok u r the most welcome my friend ,i really did like it
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Traps you inside.
Burns you to oblivion.
Rips the flesh
From your bones.
...owch
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Yeah it might be a bit painful. LoL. I had some odd moods there. can you tell? LoL. But I love the poems that came out of it.
~Ciao
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Definately my favorite....one of the best poems I've read. Keep writing.
~Jess
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Hey thanks. Thats a good thing to know. Im glad you like it. One of the best compliments Ive gotten. Thanks.
~Ciao
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It's absolutely amazing and beatuiful and prettyful and amazing.... I love it to pieces. The pieces of my broken soul...
~*~Love from an Ayngel~*~
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Hey thanks. I love it too. I just came to me when I saw the pic. LoL.
Ciao
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I get the first comment dance! Whee!
Obviously you write that poem yourself, right? It so totally matches the pic. Amazing..
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Actually I dont think I worte that poem about me. But I dont know. It just came to me. Im a way it could be about me, but Im not to sure. I just write what comes to my head. Thanks for the comment. And ya I got the pic and wrote the poem. Thanks
Ciao
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