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Published: 2004-08-13 21:50:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 282; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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Description Heart racing
Stomach constricting
Body growing colder
Mouth getting dryer.

Breathing getting harder
Eyes sliding back
Hands gripping tighter
Back arching up.

Legs stiffen
Hands stiffen
Body quivers
Relax.

Mind dead
Heart stopping
Eyes staring blankly at nothing
Soul floating away.

You’re just a whore
You’re nothing more
And now you’re gone
At the break of dawn.
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Comments: 15

darkestayngel [2004-08-13 23:34:46 +0000 UTC]

I really like how you change which lines rhyme everytime. Keeps a body on their toes it does.

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-08-13 23:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I never really think about it until I read it later. It kinda just comes out. Does kinda keep a body on its toes though.

~Ciao

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2004-08-14 06:43:04 +0000 UTC]

... a DEAD body....

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-08-15 06:10:04 +0000 UTC]

What?????

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2004-08-15 08:32:54 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha I dunno. The poem is called murder... so a dead body seemed suitable to talk about.... I dunno... ~shakes head~ I'm just twisted.

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-08-15 17:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha. Its okay that your twisted. Makes conversations more fun. LoL. You do have a good point with the dead body.

~Ciao

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2004-08-15 18:14:51 +0000 UTC]



okies!!

(ps. I'm in a good mood today... even though I'm STARVING!!!! )

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-08-15 19:45:03 +0000 UTC]

You should eat then. Lots and lots of food. And its good your in a good mood.

~Ciao

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2004-08-16 04:21:39 +0000 UTC]

I eat too much @_@ lol... but okies ^__________^

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-08-17 00:40:13 +0000 UTC]

You dont eat too much. I eat too little. LoL. Thats why it seems you eat too much. hahha

~Ciao

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2004-08-17 00:48:24 +0000 UTC]

nooo... I'm eating AGAIN lol... I think I just... eat too much lol. But you've started eating more and I've started eating less since I met you... but somehow you're getting skinnier and I'm getting fatter ~glares~ stop giving all the fat to me...

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-08-17 00:57:21 +0000 UTC]

You are not getting fat! And no Im eating less again. I prolly havent eaten a full meal in like 2 weeks. My bad. Give me some fat if you think your fat, I can put it in my boobs. Hahaha.

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2004-08-17 06:33:39 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha sure thing hun. QUICK GRAB IT!!!!

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lenshaya [2004-08-13 21:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great... I really love it

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devilskitten In reply to lenshaya [2004-08-13 21:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Thanks. I so did not think I would get a fav on this. Thanks so much. Means a lot.

~Ciao

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