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Published: 2004-09-10 03:30:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 280; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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I heard a rapping on my doorTapping, wanting, needing more.
Listen close for he has come
You need not know this someone.
You count the taps
As they get stronger.
Beating faster
Sound of your heart.
The tapping stops
You hear him breathing.
Turn around
Your mind is seething.
Seething with fear
You watch as he draws ever near.
Face still hidden in shadow
As the light behind makes you glow.
Reaching out he touches your face
Gentle hands as they trace.
Your eyes fill with tears
As your face curls with fears.
A quick slice
End of your life.
Fall to the floor
You see him leave;
Your last sight ever.
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Comments: 6
darkestayngel [2004-09-12 07:33:07 +0000 UTC]
I really like it actually. The beginning starts off beautifully. Lots of tension and such building up. good work methinks!
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darkvenom [2004-09-12 00:01:33 +0000 UTC]
i agree that its not one of your better poems but its still pretty good nice and dark hehe
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