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devilskitten — Setting Sun
Published: 2004-01-21 05:24:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Like the setting sun she falls.
Dropping to the earth
With tears that soak her face.
Her purity shooting out
Like rays of the sun.
Shining bright and colourful.

As the tears hit the earth
Life begins to sprout,
But she falls more.
Closer to the earth
Closer to the cold
Further from reality.

Her life flashing
Before her eyes.
And soon;
Like the sun she is gone.
Buried with the earth
To go and shine on someone else
To brighten up their day
And make them love again.

But inside she cries
Yet will not let others see.
She hides her pain with scars
That forever will be.
And still brightens up our days
Until she cant take it
And she falls
Falls to the earth
In tears.
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Comments: 4

herladyship [2004-01-21 05:26:50 +0000 UTC]

that poem really hits home with me .... it reminds me a lot of a very close friend of mine.

the image is beautiful, and very fitting.

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devilskitten In reply to herladyship [2004-01-22 03:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks. Im glad that you like my poem. Does it hit in a good way or a bad one? Or is it kinda the way that it makes you remember? Thanks a lot. So how are you?

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herladyship In reply to devilskitten [2004-01-23 16:01:52 +0000 UTC]

its neither, really. you just described my friend.

and im very well, thank you

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devilskitten In reply to herladyship [2004-01-26 05:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok. Well I guess that could be a good thing. Well thanks for the comment. Talk to you later.
Ciao

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