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devilskitten β€” Shatter
Published: 2004-02-20 03:25:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 18
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Description Broken to pieces.
Shattered hope
And dreams.
Lost love
Lost life.
Take the pain
It’s you I blame.

Burned to ash
My body you did thrash.
Put me in a cage
Take out your rage.
Sliced with fear
While you whisper in my ear.
I have been sighted
Our souls now united.

Shatter my life
Smash my soul.
Break my heart
Crash my dreams.
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Comments: 12

guacharro [2004-02-21 20:53:59 +0000 UTC]

It's good, but I think think the end is weak, other than that...it's great.

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devilskitten In reply to guacharro [2004-02-22 02:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Ya the end is idna weak. I might fix that if I feel up to it. Thanks again
~Ciao

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darkestayngel [2004-02-21 18:34:14 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I love it... wow that's so amazing. I love the whispering in your ear one. Gets to me like the Drive By Punch song... The one with the rain and the bedroom and stuff. I'll make you listen to it someday but it gets to me something like that. I love it.

--
~*~Love from an Ayngel~*~

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-02-22 02:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
~Ciao

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bittersweetpoet [2004-02-21 18:32:26 +0000 UTC]

really nice piece

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devilskitten In reply to bittersweetpoet [2004-02-22 02:54:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks
~Ciao

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night-symphony [2004-02-20 07:12:57 +0000 UTC]

awsome its good that you let emotions flow out of you like that

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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-02-20 21:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Hahaha. Ya I do let out my emotions. Quite well.

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night-symphony In reply to devilskitten [2004-02-21 03:42:05 +0000 UTC]

thats good you experese them beautifuly

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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-02-21 07:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Means a lot.
~Ciao

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night-symphony In reply to devilskitten [2004-02-22 19:59:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad ^.^

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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-02-24 03:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Im glad too.

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