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devilskitten — Sweet Rain
Published: 2004-07-14 02:45:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Light rain trickling through her hairWashing over her face
Running down her body.
Dripping off her finger tips
Streaming her makeup off her excited eyes.
Settling at her feet.
She runs dancing on the street
Splashing in the puddles
Screaming with her friends.
Laughing and running
Wind blowing the rain in her face
Rain lashing through her hair.
Smiling and laughing like a child
Running free with her friends
Isn’t it great that she’s 17?
It’s great how one small thing
Can bring back the child within
And bring laughter only a child knows.
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Comments: 9
I love the happy innocence and openness- it sets this poem apart from much liturature depicting the teen years (dissillusionment, unempoweredness, bitterness, uncertainty, and regret are often standard fare here......). This is a good thing....
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mayb its the fact that i know you two and know your bond...or mayb its the sleep deprivation...but i found this to be an extrememly beautiful piece...like WOW beautiful...so beautiful and happy...wonderful piece.
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Wow. That means a lot that you see it as a beautiful and happy piece. Thanks a lot for the comment. It could be because you understand the bond or it could be that you are over tired. LoL. Not sure. Thanks again hun.
~Ciao
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well im not tired now and i still see it the same way, so it must be the understanding and the way you have written it. totally rules
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Thats good that your not tired now. Glad you still like it. I think its both as well. Thanks again. glomp:
~Ciao
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awwww.... that was soooo cool when we did that. We SOOO have to do it again. And we weren't dry for TWO DAYS after that too... It was awesome.
Good job on the poem. It totally brings back all the memories!
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It sure does bring back the memories. And we kind of did that again today, but not really. We werent running through the streets screaming and getting honked at. LoL. But we did get soaked. I love it. I love the memories.
~Ciao
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Truth in every word... man I was dripping lol.
Memories... gooooood times.
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It is truth in every word eh? Yeah it was great when we got inside my house and my dad was like wow your really wet. Hahha. I was like really? Cuase the puring rain woulndt do that at all. We were soaked. LoL.
With us its always good times. Well 99% of the time LoL.
~Ciao
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