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Published: 2004-04-13 03:34:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Hiding in the shadowsI can smell your fear.
The sweat dripping
From your face.
Blood running down your arms
Dripping to the cold ground
Where you sit in fear.
You see my golden eyes
Flashing in the moonlight.
You hear my growling breath
While I smell for your blood.
I stop…
You see me clawing closer
To the place you hide.
Crack…
A whip snaps into my back.
I roar in pain
As blood sprays you in the face.
Reaching up with my claws
I rip through your chest
And watch you fall.
A chain pulled around my neck
I’m ripped off
Your broken bloody body
Pulled into a cage
Brought back to the zoo
To have people stare and taunt
People just like you.
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Comments: 7
darkestayngel [2004-04-13 23:40:28 +0000 UTC]
Awesome awesome work!! But you know that. I *did* approve it lol. I very much like the way that this poem holds so much tension through the fact that the animal is attempting the kill yet cannot accomplish it easily due to the chains, etc. Very nice.
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~*~Love from an Ayngel~*~
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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-04-14 00:28:46 +0000 UTC]
Hey there Ari. Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it. Yes it does suck that "it" cant accomplish the task of killin the human.
~Ciao
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guacharro [2004-04-13 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]
GR-R-R-R-REAT! Heheh....I like it! *Places her stamp of approval on "Wild Eyes"*
Very Nice. *Applauds Wildly*
~Bird
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devilskitten In reply to guacharro [2004-04-13 21:43:55 +0000 UTC]
Hey thanks a lot. That means a lot to me. Im glad that you like it.
~Ciao
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DarkDelusion [2004-04-13 09:39:01 +0000 UTC]
wow!..... wow!! I LOVE it!! that is.....wow! You just described... everything so... WOW!!!!
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devilskitten In reply to DarkDelusion [2004-04-13 21:46:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much. I like it too. LoL. Thanks again
~Ciao
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