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DevilsSpawn — Step Out
Published: 2006-02-07 15:39:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Step out,
take a look at yourself now.
There's the mirror
now don't be scared,
it's time to face the truth.
No make-up
not a thread of clothes,
all natural.
This is who you really are,
angry,
depressed.
Don't deny yourself your face,
nothing else matters,
but getting past this self-hate.
Behold the truth,
passed the orifice of your eyes.
All you see is grotesque,
morbid images of un-reality.
You know you're lying to yourself,
condradicted everyday,
but still that reflection you see,
remains the same.
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Comments: 8

JasonHinnocks [2006-03-02 20:48:00 +0000 UTC]

WOW.... just brillient... most artists that do poetry would call one word lines pointless... I call it the way you are... you could write a poem with three words, three lines.. and get 4 out of 4 stars

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DevilsSpawn In reply to JasonHinnocks [2006-03-02 20:59:53 +0000 UTC]

thanx mark.... i kinda liked this one.

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animearchangel [2006-02-08 18:55:05 +0000 UTC]

awsome, and how very true...your good at structuring poetry to emphasis your emotion/idea... for poetry should say truth whether it is good or not, and need to make it be in a beautiful way no matter what

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DevilsSpawn In reply to animearchangel [2006-02-08 19:01:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the comment about my stucturing, i don't think about it too much as i write, it just kinda comes out that way

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animearchangel In reply to DevilsSpawn [2006-02-08 22:19:44 +0000 UTC]

the better! natural talent

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666holly [2006-02-07 23:06:50 +0000 UTC]

great poem it shows how you feel about yourself only in words i reallly really like it . i think it shows alot!!!

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DevilsSpawn In reply to 666holly [2006-02-08 03:52:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you holly

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phantomvoices [2006-02-07 15:41:22 +0000 UTC]


good poem
i wont comment on the subject of it though. you know what i think.

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