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devious-pixie — Broken Baby Doll
Published: 2004-01-25 22:03:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 476; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 79
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Description Broken little baby doll
been used and abuse for so long
Shiny green eyes
opening up to reality for the first time.
No one will wipe your tears away this time doll
Hearts have turned to stone
your cries fall on deaf ears
Your paper thin nails
will never be enough to claw your way out of here
Trapped inside this house of cards
and fairytale realms
Where nothing is real
and every word has a hidden meaning
Where love means lust
and lust means goodbye
Lift up your skirts once more dolly
show them all what you have to offer.
Let them write "I love you" across your porcelain skin,
marring your red lips with their devils kiss.
None of it matters now that the lies have been revealed
your dolly eyes are vacant now
and your chest no longer beats in breakdowns of ecstasy
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Comments: 6

x-LeiNeR-x [2005-06-03 23:05:30 +0000 UTC]

i've written things like this in the past....a little disturbing the way i view it (because im using my experience in a relation to this piece, an angle you may not have meant it to be seen in (or maybe thats exactly how you meant it))

very well written, great job with the imagery

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devious-pixie In reply to x-LeiNeR-x [2005-07-21 14:51:39 +0000 UTC]

I wrote this so long ago, however yes I do think I wrote with the intention of it being slightly disturbed. If I'm not mistaken it was about a past relationship where I was not the one in control. I think this might be a nearly 2yr old poem lol.

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Theft-of-thought [2004-03-05 22:37:06 +0000 UTC]

this was awesome sara you are my favorite poet... keep it up/

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devious-pixie In reply to Theft-of-thought [2004-03-22 06:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks babe

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Theft-of-thought In reply to devious-pixie [2004-03-22 19:52:38 +0000 UTC]

no biggie it was awesome

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rubenesque [2004-01-26 20:17:37 +0000 UTC]

You said it all. =fav

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