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devious-pixie — Broken by Trust
Published: 2003-09-12 19:34:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 20
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Description Broken trust, forgotten by love
When will I learn
I'm not good enough?

He said 'I love you forever'
only his forever wasn't long
enough

You begged and pleaded
made promises of changing
but his love wasn't true
He gave up without a fight

Romeo and Juliet you definitely
were not

Together forever that was
the vow
So why is it only you who's
Bleeding this romance
away?

Now all thats left is broken trust, self-ashamed lust
and the jagged scars of not good
enough
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Comments: 10

ar0n [2003-09-15 05:20:03 +0000 UTC]

wow...so deep... makes me feel cold inside... luv it....

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devious-pixie In reply to ar0n [2003-09-15 05:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol haha at this moment I really appreciate that...More than you know...Thankies

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ar0n In reply to devious-pixie [2003-09-15 05:25:27 +0000 UTC]

that must have been the worlds fastest reply.... i pressed submit like 1.5 minits ago
lol

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devious-pixie In reply to ar0n [2003-09-15 05:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Oops sorry...when one is slightly drunk things gooo soo fast...but no I was on the page and was shocked to see a comment hehehe...

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placebosuckerlav [2003-09-14 21:58:59 +0000 UTC]

vert emotional. great job. i love it.

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devious-pixie In reply to placebosuckerlav [2003-09-14 23:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Thankies very much

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shelcatzoe [2003-09-12 20:18:35 +0000 UTC]

nice work. i like it...

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devious-pixie In reply to shelcatzoe [2003-09-12 20:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankies ...

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triplesecman [2003-09-12 20:07:24 +0000 UTC]

I really like that. I actually just experienced something like that.

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devious-pixie In reply to triplesecman [2003-09-12 20:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, and sorry that you have to experience it at all...

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