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Published: 2003-10-09 19:45:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 49
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Your like a nartcotic dripping from a rusty needlePlunging deep into my waiting veins
Never can I get enough of the essence of your drug
My need for you tingling along each nerver ending
Every hit from the opiate of your lips is like the first
I breathe you in and choke on your love
Intoxicated on the poison of your eyes
Fill me up with the heroine of your lust
so high, never will one hit be enough
Breathing in, breathing out. I'm a willing addict
to your sweet narcotic
I'm the junky and ou are my quick fix
Come get me high my love, take me to the places that I've
never been before
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Comments: 7
endofeternity [2003-12-19 07:39:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is incredible. I really liked the third stanza- it hit home a lot. I would give you some constructive criticism but there isn't any to give.
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devious-pixie In reply to endofeternity [2003-12-20 04:26:14 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you very much that means alot to me and I'm glad you liked
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devious-pixie In reply to evilfaeries [2003-10-25 06:26:44 +0000 UTC]
lol yup thats the point. It's shitty and evil and it hurts more than anything yet without it we are lost. Loving the right person is key...As we know I don't like loving the right person
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Theft-of-thought [2003-10-11 01:47:03 +0000 UTC]
this was nice... keep up the good work sarah.. and ya awesome.. so keep it real... im movin down to orlando with charmaine. and ya know i hope i can get back with her. she's all ive thought about since i got in touch with her again, well her and my friends such as your self... i dont want ya to worry bout me im a strong kid. im a smart ass who knows how ta take care of him self... so yeah cuz i just start trippen when i think of you worried bout me... its too much stress... un-needed... so yeah rest easy sweetie...
im safe...
love/
zackh
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devious-pixie In reply to Theft-of-thought [2003-10-11 04:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the comment
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devious-pixie [2003-10-09 19:47:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh pooh I missed my spelling mistakes...forgive me it's "nerve endings" and "you are my quick fix" eep I hate when I do that but I don't feel like deleting and resubmitting.
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