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Published: 2004-03-22 06:56:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 37
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Your pretty little whoredress me up in hues
of blue and pink
Make me dance for my
meal
Praise me with each spread
of my thighs
Hurt me, abuse me
make me your own
Rape me with your devilish tongue
Intoxicate me with your lies
of devotion
Tickle my skin, tantilize
my senses.
oohh make me the pretty
little whore you've been
waiting for.
Hands held tight
frightened and dependant
Tell me what a good job I'm doing
as I'm bending and licking
your treasured toy of love.
Penetrate me with the needle
of your flesh.
Addicted little whore
Oohh please give me more
make me beg, make me cry
make me pant with delight
Nasty, dirty, bad little girl
punish me, punish me
your pretty little whore
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Comments: 13
agent7even [2004-04-05 15:52:18 +0000 UTC]
First time I read a poem and actually could be arsed to writ e comment so you must of done something right..
Did you take the photo as well?
Nice writing
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devious-pixie In reply to agent7even [2004-05-02 07:56:52 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm just totally blushing...i'm honored that I wrote something that captured your attention enough to make you pause and leave a comment. I only wish I had taken that photo though.
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rubenesque [2004-04-03 12:40:20 +0000 UTC]
This is a fav - no doubt. The tragedy in your words makes me want to curl into a ball and shut off my senses. On a personal level I remember how this feels - you did a great jod executing a horrible life/feelings. Bravo
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devious-pixie In reply to rubenesque [2004-05-02 07:58:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. Not an easy topic, not a pretty picture but something true to my life and many others. I appreciate the time and the fave
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Theft-of-thought [2004-03-22 21:44:20 +0000 UTC]
awesome. that was a sick poem loved it... keep writing stuff like that.... that was ill as hell...
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devious-pixie In reply to Theft-of-thought [2004-03-24 05:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you doll glad you liked it.
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Theft-of-thought In reply to devious-pixie [2004-03-24 18:15:20 +0000 UTC]
anytime there buddy ol pal
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katarthis [2004-03-22 06:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh my. Well, I wasn't sure what I was getting into when I clicked the thumbnail. You certainly have a way with words, and the poem doesn't mince words... comes right out and gets the poem across...
I should hope you don't really feel this way...
But what can I say?
Bless,
k
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devious-pixie In reply to katarthis [2004-03-24 05:30:51 +0000 UTC]
I can't say I exactly feel this way, but I have had my moments. I appreciate that you've taken the time to read and leave me feedback thank you
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devious-pixie In reply to PinkuEspeon [2004-03-24 05:33:02 +0000 UTC]
and the fact that you left an immature comment says nothing to me...Thanks for wasting YOUR time
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