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Published: 2009-05-24 19:38:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2533; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 0
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no photomanipulation.natural light
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Oddly, this is not one of the photographs I like most in your gallery as far as technique and composition are concerned. There seems to be too much "weight" on the right and the empty space on the left does not really add to the meaning or the composition.
But.
It is certainly one of the images that impacts me and captivates me most! It's charged with meaning and significant elements. That pen! Hiding in the shadows, behind the back of your model, it is writing the words that would make the impact of that apple bearable. Because the apple is the unbearable and frightening symbol of desire, the unrepenting cause of our Fall -never quite falling itself!
This is a powerful piece in your exceptional series.
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hi vera...in my humble opinion, i would consider cropping out the necklace...for me, it distracts a bit from the image itself and i am not sure what purpose it serves other than adding a hint of color...but, like i say, this is just my opinion and what really matters is how YOU feel about it!
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thank you very much, my dear! i know it's a very dificult piece. i'm thinking of deleting it .
sorry for my late feedback. i'm so busy! (and tired
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I wish you didn't delete it but I can understand your urge if you're not quite satisfied with it.
Take care!
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what do you think about the necklace? someone said i should delete it. i don't know. i'm hesitating... i think it's quite ok. i need your opinia
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I think the necklace is necessary. It appears so much in your work it acquires a deeper significance. Even if you yourself are not sure of its meaning. And, as I said in a previous critique, the gloves and necklaces, etc., have a strong sensuality and enhance the impact of the naked bodies.
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thank you. my thoughts in your words
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I'm featuring this beautiful piece here: [link] .
If you don't want to be featured, please note me and I'll remove it.
And if you like stamps, you can use this one: [link]
Kisses&Hugs
Katia
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thank you kindly!
sorry for this late response!
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You're more than welcome!
Don't worry for the late reply, I am the friggin' queen of late replies!
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oh, amazing series, my god. i fell in love. beautiful.
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I love the entire series, that has something magical.
I think that in this one, the darkness of the feather is a bit of a distraction though.
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is a questionable piece of work, isn't it?indeed, maybe i should lighten up a bit the feather
thank you for the advice
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I wouldn't go that far. I simply think that a whiter or brighter feather would stand better out.
Don't get me wrong, this is very good!
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one brighter feather coming up!
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i feel as though i should just add EVERYTHING you do to my favorites!
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I just love that you only use natural light in your picture. I wish I could get that good using natural light
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Oh I really mean it 
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imi place conceptul, lumina, dar cred ca acel colier nu se prea potriveste in cadru. parca atrage atentia prea tare.
oricum, o fotografie foarte buna
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multumesc
e prea greu sa'l scot in PS
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n-ai pentru ce.
cred ca ai putea sa incerci sa intuneci doar partea aia, nu sa-l scoti de tot
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then, maybe you'll give it a go
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