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Published: 2011-11-08 17:28:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 488; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 5
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Description Broken angel spread your wings
raise your voice let's hear you sing
soar above those mountains high
raise your arms and ask God "why?"
close your eyes and feel your tears
listen close to all their cheers
Darling, now your time has come
Death's sweet call will welcome some
you're the author make your choice
now's your chance let's hear your voice
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Comments: 10

River-of-Night [2016-04-19 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love love love it! Amazing - I wish I could write like this!

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WolfInMotion [2011-12-08 04:43:06 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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xXVegasGirlXx [2011-11-22 23:45:28 +0000 UTC]

This one's good. It's very interesting. Kudos :]

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devotedwritter93 In reply to xXVegasGirlXx [2011-11-22 23:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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Loser-Bunny [2011-11-22 18:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Really good (: i enjoyed it very much

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devotedwritter93 In reply to Loser-Bunny [2011-11-22 18:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank You! ^_^

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Loser-Bunny In reply to devotedwritter93 [2011-11-22 18:24:56 +0000 UTC]

of course haha

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TheDeathOfAlibi [2011-11-08 17:31:00 +0000 UTC]

I think that is a inspirational piece of poetry that is really well put together. Great rhythm, amazing imagery, and of course how you presented it was just phenomenal. I love it!

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devotedwritter93 In reply to TheDeathOfAlibi [2011-11-08 17:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^^

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TheDeathOfAlibi In reply to devotedwritter93 [2011-11-08 17:37:23 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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