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Published: 2011-09-19 16:27:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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I'm screaming for helpLost in this world
Unsure where to go
Who am I...?
I'm fading away
losing myself in this darkness
choking on bits of life
as they leave my body
Help...
I'm losing strength
I can't go on
Please! I'm begging now
I slide to my knees
My heart's tearing in half
Help...
I whisper once more
My eyes are heavy
I'm losing this battle
Falling further down
Help...
My mind calls out to you
But it's too late
My battle was lost
Help...had not come...
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Comments: 4
it's not too bad, lol. just remember it's Losing* not Loosing* loose means to make less tight and lose means to no longer have, sorry, i've seen this so many times just today Dx
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haha thanks! I'm such a terrible speller, but I love writing
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Thanks for the advice, I'll try to work on making my writing less cheesy
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