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devotedwritter93 — Let Me Die
Published: 2012-01-23 22:02:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 930; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 3
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Description Broken hearted
here I lie
push me down
and watch me cry
break my wings
so I can't fly
I'm here alone
So watch me die
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Comments: 15

ThousandMaster-Nagi [2012-02-15 19:33:42 +0000 UTC]

a talented wordsmith you are

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KelaLewis-Morin [2012-02-02 23:40:22 +0000 UTC]

i like you have a unique way with words. very effective and succinct a range of feelings can be felt. good job

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devotedwritter93 In reply to KelaLewis-Morin [2012-02-03 02:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!

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KelaLewis-Morin In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-02-03 03:00:38 +0000 UTC]

its okay check out some of my stuff if you want

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devotedwritter93 In reply to KelaLewis-Morin [2012-02-03 18:49:49 +0000 UTC]

I definitely will!

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KelaLewis-Morin In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-02-03 23:30:40 +0000 UTC]

okay let me know what you think

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BookWurm15 [2012-01-26 17:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww..... That's short, but emotion-jerking. :3 Perfect.

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devotedwritter93 In reply to BookWurm15 [2012-01-27 16:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^_^

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devotedwritter93 [2012-01-25 02:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much guys! <3

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intricately-ordinary [2012-01-25 01:24:04 +0000 UTC]

so sad! but beautiful

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animekaratechick2322 [2012-01-24 20:16:35 +0000 UTC]

EPIC!

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Kay-March [2012-01-24 20:11:24 +0000 UTC]

perfectly short... beautiful word playing

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TheMelancholyArtist [2012-01-23 22:08:30 +0000 UTC]

looooooooooove it!

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devotedwritter93 In reply to TheMelancholyArtist [2012-01-23 23:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^

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TheMelancholyArtist In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-01-24 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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