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devotedwritter93 — My Escape
Published: 2011-03-01 04:53:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description It's like a puzzle
forming words
arranging them together
the creation of a picture
a masterpiece written
an escape formed

A door leading to a world
created by my own hand
written with my words
a dwelling place
to release emotion
and relive memories treasured

My deepest wishes
untold memories
and masks once worn
each story's a journal
of unknown secrets
and gaurded emotions

With each new word
a new chapter begins
I get lost inside
revealing my heart
with pencil and paper
a story is formed
the ending I chose
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Comments: 5

digimonspirit1 [2011-09-08 09:26:13 +0000 UTC]

I enjoy the peace a lot. The schme for the poem is perfect and I can easily see your passion. Very nice work indeed

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devotedwritter93 In reply to digimonspirit1 [2011-09-12 16:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I do appricate it

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digimonspirit1 In reply to devotedwritter93 [2011-09-12 19:45:51 +0000 UTC]

np

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MagicBird1233 [2011-03-01 05:15:00 +0000 UTC]

I LIKE IT! I think it was really good, and this is coming from another fellow writer I really love the imagery and sentance structure. I am sure you will get an A on this poem.

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devotedwritter93 In reply to MagicBird1233 [2011-03-01 06:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much !!

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