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Published: 2012-01-18 05:43:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 597; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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She lies aloneno love to fill her heart
a sorrowful life
fearful and lonely
no hand to guide her
she's void of life
engulfed in darkness
black and blue skin
ragged clothes
dirt filled hair
yet the world walks on
avoiding sad eyes
tearful and desperate
walking onward
a cruel world
all she sees
hearts blind to compassion
dragging breaths
a fading heartbeat
her time is up
still the world walks on
a tear escapes
slow shutting eyes
a silent heart
a bitter end
a sweet beginning
renewed life
as new eyes open
a white surrounding
pure and new
a gliding figure
marching forward
arms open
offering love
"My Dearest Daughter"
he calls to her
a smile shared
home sweet home
a sweet embrace
a new life starts
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Comments: 8
devotedwritter93 In reply to yamakie [2012-01-22 04:16:10 +0000 UTC]
yeah it does, she dies and goes to heaven and she is happy to be out of the pain that she was in while on earth.
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yamakie In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-01-22 04:18:27 +0000 UTC]
hmm,,, not a big fan of god but a bautiful poem
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devotedwritter93 In reply to yamakie [2012-01-22 08:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks And I understand everyone is entitled to thier own beliefs and oppinions
I totally respect that!
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yamakie In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-01-23 00:56:32 +0000 UTC]
OMG thak you!!! people keep telling to be christian and god beliver biut i dont want to thank you for not forcing that on me!!
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devotedwritter93 In reply to yamakie [2012-01-23 05:35:17 +0000 UTC]
haha I know how that goes! I hate when people try to force stuff on me! Augh! it totally sucks! No problem at all (:
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devotedwritter93 In reply to xXVegasGirlXx [2012-01-22 02:47:53 +0000 UTC]
haha thank you! you should check out the original poem too! I have it on here. I've been working on this one for a few years
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