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Published: 2015-10-04 18:15:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 7447; Favourites: 131; Downloads: 55
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Well, this is the last page I've planned for this little story, which isn't to say these characters won't reappear at some point, but if they do it likely won't be for a while. If anyone has any feed back I'd love to hear it. (Good or bad, it'd be good to know where I need to improve).Anyway, hope any of you who've followed this little story have enjoyed it.
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Indeed, I hope she can get MUCH bigger, so much so she shocks herself!
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I'll be honest, drawing this comic was very draining and by the end I wasn't hugely enjoying drawing it. If I come up with a suitable story line for something (that doesn't require so much fine detail on each page) I might do something in future but I've nothing in mind for now.
Glad you enjoyed it though and thanks for the kind words
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That's a wonderful sequence you created here. I really loved it.
Regarding possible improvements, I can't say for sure as I can't even draw like you. Maybe facial features could be refined, like the shape of the eyes and mouth at the different angles. Body and muscle shapes and proportions will get better with practice.
Anyway, I enjoyed your storyΒ
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Glad you enjoyed it.
I agree that there are a lot of individual elements that could be improved. Still getting used to working on a graphics tablet as well, but yes, much more practise is needed. I'll look to do some anatomy studies, if you've noticed eye & mouth shapes (& body & muscles too) are points that can be improved then that'll probably be a good place to start. Thanks very much for the feedback, very useful.
All the best.
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