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SlimMckenzie [2016-05-19 17:32:39 +0000 UTC]

3d-school feedback:
First, sorry for taking so long!
Second, she's quite the lovely girl (which is not news). The outfit is a classic favorite, and she is well lit (it looks like a sun-sky), giving the lighting even and bright spots, with nice strong  shadows. Two things that I think could have been improved upon: 1) Her left hand is being "attacked" by her shirt. I know there's a way with weight maps to fix it, but for me, I usually just pull the hand back a bit so the collision detection doesn't wrap around the hand.  2) her left leg appears to be floating for the most part. If you look at a reference image of a person laying on their side like that, the bottom leg would most likely flush against the ground the whole path. While I know that flattening a leg is a pain (especially if you don't hav-e pregenerated morphs), I think in general the model could have been a tiny bit lower (her hand is also floating), and if you had turned her leg out a bit, it would have caused her knee to touch as well.

Otherwise she is certainly a lovely image of someone that makes me wish I spent more time at the library, or in class, or wherever it is she works.

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MorphingMoni [2016-05-01 20:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Cute girl
Would look awsome with black highheels

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Magaton1 [2016-04-30 04:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Hello Miss  

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