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When I woke up, I was alone there was a wreckage of the thing I was on. I stood up for the first time and look at my surroundings.. there were weird Fish things hopping out of the water, a bright Circle in the sky. there was other creatures like these white things with yellow beaks. I felt something I feel like a empty hole in my tummy. I spotted a red thing crawling. I follow it. I ate a couple. It tasted so good. I never tasted anything before but I wanted more I followed one of those up a Hill up . The green I was concern at first. But I wandered around, wondering if there were others of my kind, I saw black figures in the area mist, and tiny oceans were about. I stopped in one and quickly discovered how fun it was. I was still concerned, but I don’t know how to feel yet. Strange flying creatures flew by. A strange red thing came out of the hole. It looked at me strangely like it never seen anything like it before. But I wasn’t too concerned, but I did heard a grounding. some rare. I love the pretty plants with the colors what I found them.

The story is pretty bad, but the art is bad as well I’m going to try to improve but don’t know yet.

Description
When I woke up, I was alone there was a wreckage of the thing I was on. I stood up for the first time and look at my surroundings.. there were weird Fish things hopping out of the water, a bright Circle in the sky. there was other creatures like these white things with yellow beaks. I felt something I feel like a empty hole in my tummy. I spotted a red thing crawling. I follow it. I ate a couple. It tasted so good. I never tasted anything before but I wanted more I followed one of those up a Hill up . The green I was concern at first. But I wandered around, wondering if there were others of my kind, I saw black figures in the area mist, and tiny oceans were about. I stopped in one and quickly discovered how fun it was. I was still concerned, but I don’t know how to feel yet. Strange flying creatures flew by. A strange red thing came out of the hole. It looked at me strangely like it never seen anything like it before. But I wasn’t too concerned, but I did heard a grounding. some rare. I love the pretty plants with the colors what I found them.

The story is pretty bad, but the art is bad as well I’m going to try to improve but don’t know yet.