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dinospac — Going back to the wild, chapter 3

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Description I heard ran until I heard something for once in my language, I ran to it. I was excited it was the first time I was meeting one of my own then it fell out of the tree..

Spiny : what are you? I’ll wasn’t expecting you

Teri : um I what wasn’t expecting you haha um please don’t eat me um


Spiny : what no I’m not going to eat you why what I do that ok maybe I’ll actually do but no, don’t worry about it

Teri : um look I was looking for um my kind but you know those flying things in the sky um if like seen them

Spiny : yes

Teri : o o ok so I know you um I have these flappy’s like they do but less fluffy um I tried to do what they do but you can tell

Spiny : yes I can

Teri : well I

Spiny to walk off to somewhere else

Teri : wait, where are you going?

Spiny : to find others like me way ? i’m not going to hang out with whoever you are.

Teri : but there some scary stuff out there what might get you killed?

Spiny : so I’m ain’t afraid of nothing

Teri begins to step out of the pile of leaves and follows her.


Spiny: don’t follow me around

Teri : I’m not i am just trying to um ……..

Spiny : what is it now cat got your tongue or something spell it


Teri: ……?.?!.!.? points his wing to behind her


Spiny turns around and spots a big brown beast creature


Spiny bites and slashes at the thing trying to take it out dodging it’s attacks


Spiny : Teri help me Teri run way


Spiny then gets knock down on the ground before the thing bites down on her head. A loud screech was herd and it ran off..,



Teri: did that help um

Spiny: yes, it did Teri

Teri : why do you call me that

Spiny : I don’t know why do you call me spiny

Teri : it’s because you know your spine, so I called you that high. I think it’s a nice name

Spiny: don’t know if that’s an insult or what but I’ll take it. you’re name is Teri then all right until we find are owned kind and until we know if we’re supposed to be enemies or friends doesn’t matter to me we are not friends just acquaintances

Teri : ok let’s headed out um … please don’t kill me definitely besties

Spiny : don’t pretend I didn’t heard that



Later that night they slept as they did Teri slept in the tree wear spiny slipped near a river.


OK, so this time the writing isn’t that bad, especially form me but the art is really bad especially in the background, but hey, I am gonna be nice to myself for once, and I think I did a pretty good job on the facial expressions especially in this chapter oh yeah, and the reason why I change Teri species is because of the colors. I am not going to explain it here but yeah also don’t worry that other terra sure will show up soon, but that’s a different character in the background you’ll see..
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