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Published: 2009-01-22 16:07:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description When it's not love
and there's no lust-
When everyone tells you
leave, you must;
'cause you can't stay,
but you can't go.
You're whipped my friend,
it must be so.
'cause you spend your days,
and you spend your nights
making sure, that for him,
everything's right.
still you get no attention
or affection,
and there's no trace
of a deeper connection.
I'm sorry my friend,
but you knew from the start
that all you'll end up with
is an empty heart.
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Comments: 7

UglyDuckling323 [2009-02-14 04:00:47 +0000 UTC]

I mean sad, but well-written ending.

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UglyDuckling323 [2009-02-14 04:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww... what a great ending.

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Disastercake In reply to UglyDuckling323 [2009-02-14 05:29:42 +0000 UTC]

on the comment about the horses i just replied to i don't mean yes you're dumb but yes they're famous horses lol.

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UglyDuckling323 In reply to Disastercake [2009-02-15 18:53:21 +0000 UTC]

haha I know don't worry

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lmtm [2009-02-04 23:29:30 +0000 UTC]

I feel like this... :"cause you can't stay, but you can't go". Nice poem.

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Disastercake In reply to lmtm [2009-02-05 06:13:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much, and i'm sorry that you feel the same

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yabbles [2009-01-22 16:29:01 +0000 UTC]

intuition is one of the hardest voices to listen to.......

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