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Disastercake — That Place
Published: 2008-11-29 23:19:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Somewhere there's a place
Where signals get crossed
and friendships are frozen
Maybe it's the same place
Where lives are lost
and souls get broken
I'm in that place
or at least not far
There's heat on my face
and ice in my heart
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Comments: 3

Day-Dreamer07 [2009-06-12 15:43:14 +0000 UTC]

"There's heat on my face
and ice in my heart"
Favorite line.

I feel like this sound like just a beginning, but that that may be a good thing. Its almost the kind of "left wanting more" that's on purpose.

beautiful description!

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UglyDuckling323 [2008-12-11 00:37:41 +0000 UTC]

again, just leave it as is. The longer it is the more tedious it is to read (for me ) and also longer hardly ever means "better". Short is definitely more powerful. I love this one too.

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Disastercake In reply to UglyDuckling323 [2008-12-11 03:38:40 +0000 UTC]

thankies

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