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Published: 2009-02-05 02:16:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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You were the most magnificent thing I’d ever beheld;Translucent skin, dark hair-
Something molded by angels
Your eyes gleamed, and they exposed your soul;
A touch of sorrow, pleasure-
Things words can’t describe
Your lips, so soft, could stretch into so many forms;
A smirk, a scowl, a heartbreaking smile-
Twisting at your command
Your voice, so melodious in its manner;
Rough, tender, cold-
But always velvet
And as time went by, your brilliance only increased;
Growing, changing-
But forever stunning
How the angels must have cried that day
When you ceased to grace the world-
I guess you were a masterpiece that wasn’t meant to be completed
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Comments: 4
SundaysDreamerXx [2009-03-15 09:10:45 +0000 UTC]
Haha Sam. This makes me think of edward Cullen. But really your amazing at poetry. You really are.
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DisasterInProgress In reply to SundaysDreamerXx [2009-03-15 16:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Haha, when I was half done with this I realized people would think that.
And thanks! I just read your lyrics, you're good too!
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SundaysDreamerXx In reply to DisasterInProgress [2009-03-15 17:11:59 +0000 UTC]
ehh. that song that i posted was ohkay but it was just a one time thing. it's so hard.
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DisasterInProgress In reply to SundaysDreamerXx [2009-03-17 22:22:23 +0000 UTC]
haha it can be hard but it's easy to improve if you enjoy it.
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