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DistantAffection In reply to OmniJerBear [2012-07-25 00:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha don't worry, THEY SHALL BE BACK. Just going through a rough patch of artblock xD

Hehe thanks so much!

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DistantAffection In reply to Lee1hp [2012-07-25 00:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! :3 Hahaha that's fair, not everyone wants to be told the fails of their art, even if it's only to help xD But sure! I'm not good at more realistic type art haha, so all the help the better! x3

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Lee1hp In reply to DistantAffection [2012-07-25 00:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay here goes;

This is a very good piece of art, and you really show technique and talent all at once. The only thing is that as a realistic style, she lacks a certain amount of realism. I think it is probably the round shape of her head, and the shortness of her neck. Her chin is very small, and so it makes her lips look a bit more semi realistic. I would also put more detail in to the individual strands of hair, to make it more real. I would categorize this as semi realistic, cuz then you have it down pat. But for realism, I recommend using a reference model, as drawing a person from your mind can be very difficult. It looks good, but not real. I totally understand it was just practice, and even just for the eyes, which on the contrary, did turn out pretty good, but it is good to also practice taking critique and I also like to practice giving it XD
err, this is not meant to offend you, or anything like that, I just want to critique the best I can to help you XD you can feel free to critique anything of mine too lol
or hate meh cuz I suck at critiquing omtogjerpg

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DistantAffection In reply to Lee1hp [2012-07-25 00:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Haha, not gonna hate you silly bean xD
I was trying for a more semi realistic approach, just for me its more realistic than normal, so i always label it that way xD I do agree that the round shape of her face is actually one of the bigger differences between semi and real in this haha.

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Lee1hp In reply to DistantAffection [2012-07-25 01:10:58 +0000 UTC]

ahh XD okay lol well it realy is good! I woudnt lie!

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DistantAffection In reply to Lee1hp [2012-07-25 01:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks! and thanks for the critique :3

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DistantAffection In reply to destiny-gleek [2012-07-25 00:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! :3

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