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DistortedJaz — Where does it end ?
Published: 2005-10-13 02:17:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Where Does It End ?Im dead inside
Who is this mask i lay behind
Why don't i care
I want things the way they once were
Looking down the neck
Of another empty bottle
Intentions of a man once scorned
The burning in your eyes
The fire in your lies
You push everyone away
What do you have to hide
I can see the truth behind those lies
Is it my empathy in which you seek
Does it make you feel good
To treat me like you do
Object of my affection
Cause of my afflection
You know i'll be here another day
The same as i always was
Could it be more, should it be less
Could it be time, for someone to regress
Cause each time you break me down
It's harder to get up now
Would you be there in the end
Would you care,
Or was it all just a trend
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Comments: 5
1st of all, i think there's something wrong with ur preview pic.. the bottom half is grey.. maybe its just the computer being stupid, though...
onto the poem.. there's a lot of.. irony.. i guess in the poem.. like.. "could be more, should be less".. that is an awesome line... i love it.. overall, its really awesome. i'd just suggest to fix the preview pic, and itd be even better. ohh.. and the
i call it awesometh
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thanks babe i think i fixed all the glitches DA was playing up on me the night i was trying to submit
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Very good emotion you have put into this. I like it.
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More writing more writing!!!
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