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This was a quick brush-up on the basics.I threw on some colors, in order to make it less boring...
It's REALLY sloppy. Normally, I won't draw this poorly, but my head was beginning to hurt...
I might touch this up later, but for now it stands as is...
It looks better from a distance... and I didn't use the mirror test... I shudder to think what could be off...
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Ari-Dynamic [2012-09-29 21:37:52 +0000 UTC]
I want to critique it, but maybe I was thinking maybe you could provide me some advice on trying to make the bodies look good like that. I can't draw women at all. x_x
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Django90 In reply to Ari-Dynamic [2012-09-29 21:49:07 +0000 UTC]
I can't draw women that well either T_T but I have taken now 2 life drawing classes so I've got a concept of anatomy... but in animation, anatomy in NOT important... the story is most important and I've just been rambling haven't I?
Watch for weight distribution, capture the essence of the pose first then refine it.
Not much else I can say but practice, practice, practice...
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Ari-Dynamic In reply to Django90 [2012-09-29 21:50:56 +0000 UTC]
I'll keep trying. I posted up a picture of Beverly, maybe you can assess it?
I could use some thoughts on it.
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AmbiguousRes [2012-09-28 01:41:02 +0000 UTC]
Coloring fits, is the shoes that only bug the eye. Otherwise is great!
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Django90 In reply to AmbiguousRes [2012-09-28 01:44:01 +0000 UTC]
They should... they bug me too and I DREW the dang thing XD
I rushed a bit in the coloring
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AmbiguousRes In reply to Django90 [2012-09-28 02:13:53 +0000 UTC]
That's alright, it still came out very well. For me I'm currently bugged that a tiny icon I'm working on has not thus far come out well when it is shrunk down to size. Tweaking needed, though I'm fine with what I've got you know?
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Django90 In reply to AmbiguousRes [2012-09-28 03:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I getcha :3
For resizing stuff I'd recommend using vectors. Illustrator is good for this, but that's just me ^_^
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TrishaBeakens [2012-08-19 19:38:34 +0000 UTC]
This wasn't drawn poorly, I think it looks wonderful! I love the colors and the character's design!
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Django90 In reply to TrishaBeakens [2012-08-20 04:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^__^
I didn't say it was drawn poorly XD The colors were thrown on pretty quickly though
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Django90 In reply to Arrowfrogtmt2 [2012-08-19 04:19:27 +0000 UTC]
So true! Does the hand look off? I swear I tried to make this pose in real life and something didn't quite... click... Maybe it's just me...
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Arrowfrogtmt2 In reply to Django90 [2012-08-19 04:51:52 +0000 UTC]
I think the hands are ok. The left one may be a tiny bit too big, but not really an issue methinks. The pose itself seems a bit unnatural. I tried to do it myself and it was very uncomfortable. Her body is twisted a bit too much. This works fine in a cartoon sense, of course, but if you were going for natural, it's not a practical pose. I think the problem is with her right foot being positioned behind the left foot. That forces the body to twist a certain way which does not conform well to how her torso is positioned. It certainly isn't pleasant standing that way, anyhow, and very precariously balanced.
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Django90 In reply to Arrowfrogtmt2 [2012-08-19 06:53:57 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Thank you for the insight... I knew something was dangerously off XD
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Django90 In reply to ZDForrest [2012-08-17 16:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, for fun you can zoom in and see where colors leak around XD
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Django90 In reply to Tea-Face [2012-08-17 16:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! It took me hours to draw ^_^
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Django90 In reply to db1993 [2012-08-17 16:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, even with poor coloring I still do OK
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db1993 In reply to Django90 [2012-08-17 16:48:43 +0000 UTC]
She look like the Witch from the Wizard of Oz
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Django90 In reply to db1993 [2012-08-17 17:10:13 +0000 UTC]
Now I need to see the wizard of oz... I can't BELIEVE I haven't seen that yet... but I had a feeling that's what I was basing it off of...
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Django90 In reply to Nafyo-Toons [2012-08-17 16:39:11 +0000 UTC]
I REALLY wanted to draw something magical and then an idea popped into my head! It's slightly different from the original sketch, but it turned out well enough ^____^
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Nafyo-Toons In reply to Django90 [2012-08-17 17:14:14 +0000 UTC]
well it turned out magical indeed and good work with the coloring though. keep up a good work.
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Django90 In reply to Nafyo-Toons [2012-08-17 17:18:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm getting a little better. Still needs some work and organization... How do people OUTLINE black with white lines? I can't figure it out >__<
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Nafyo-Toons In reply to Django90 [2012-08-17 20:59:53 +0000 UTC]
keep it up then.
I don't get the point
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Django90 In reply to Nafyo-Toons [2012-08-17 23:09:55 +0000 UTC]
I... agree? I will keep it up ^__^
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Django90 In reply to WanderingFeline [2012-08-17 16:39:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^___^ I worked pretty hard on this, but not that hard as it's poorly colored. Hands were a PAIN...
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WanderingFeline In reply to Django90 [2012-08-18 02:28:03 +0000 UTC]
I can imagine! Heh. Colouring stuff by hand takes a lot outta me, but I find paint-bucketing easy... However, I don't have anywhere near as much detail in my computer work.
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Django90 In reply to WanderingFeline [2012-08-18 02:36:08 +0000 UTC]
I haven't tried paint-bucketing in a looong while XD
Might be a good strategy... if used correctly
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WanderingFeline In reply to Django90 [2012-08-18 02:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Heh. Most of the stuff I do in Flash is just doodling anyway, but I've got to try SAI some more too.
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