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Right and Wrong is only determined by perspective- DanielChapter 1: 25K… in Cash
Jazz was asleep on the couch, it was an old looking leather couch that looked like it had holes purposefully torn out of it. He opened his eyes slowly, surveying the surrounding area sleepily, He sat up and leaned forwards slightly, rubbing his eyes before looking about. He was in an old warehouse, surrounded by rows of almost empty storage shelves that seemed to stretch for miles in all directions. Serene walked over from behind one of the shelves and sighed, putting her hands on her hips, “Come on, man. We’re gonna be late for work.” she said, with a hint of mock urgency, as she pulled him to his feet and passed him his modified Revolver. The barrel on the revolver was wider than normal to accommodate for High calibre rounds, the Chamber was removable, allowing for quick reloads simply by changing the chamber itself rather than inserting individual bullets into it. Also the chamber was also an 8 shot instead of the standard 6.
Serenity and Jazz ran through the warehouse quickly and got the elevated office after a minute or two. They walked into the office, it was as deserted as the rest of the warehouse apart from the Blueprints scattered over a table and the mini fridge on a small round coffee table in the corner, a door next to it leading to the small kitchen area that consisted of a fridge, a sink, an oven and two or three small tables that looked as if they belonged in a mobile Diner. Jazz and Serenity walked up to the table and found Daniel asleep on top of the Blueprints. “Man, he works too hard.” Serenity said as she shook her head and walked over to him, she shook his shoulder making him jump up to attention, “I didn’t do it!” Daniel shouted but calmed down upon seeing it was serenity who a second later burst out laughing, rolling around on the floor.
Daniel explained the plan to Jazz and Serenity to which both of them told him they knew, multiple times, both where also annoyed that he didn’t trust them to remember. The three of them went to get dressed into their ‘work attire’. Jazz put on a baggy white sleeveless top that had a tribal wire design on the chest, a pair of Dark Blue jeans, his Black trainers that looked brand ,as if he bought them from the store this morning, new. He put on his silver watch and rubbed his short blonde hair thinking he’d forgotten something. Jazz shrugged and walked out of his changing room, he ran straight back in and grabbed his holster and revolver from the dresser, having just remembered them, and then ran back to the office to join the other two. Daniel was already waiting; wearing a grey sleeveless top, black track bottoms that had a white stripe on the out side of each leg and Blue trainers. He had also had dog tags around his neck and a blue ribbon tied around his right forearm.
Serenity was the last to arrive, she had her Brunette hair brushed back straight and immaculate, her red high lights where shown so perfectly you could count every strand of the centimetre or two of Brunette hair separating each high light. “What took you?” Jazz mused. Serenity just grunted and slapped the back of his head roughly. She was wearing a baggy black T-shirt, baggy black cargo shorts, Black trainers and a pair of diamond earrings. She picked up a red bandana, that had white crossing lines on it, off the table and put it over the top of her hair. The three then exited the ware house via a door at the back of the office and began walking towards a city that could be seen in the distance.
The three pulled up out side a large marble building in a Black Sedan that looked well cared for. Anyone would have easily mistaken this for a car that belonged to an important politician or business man as it was so clean and even well polished. The three got out of the car, Daniel was wearing a messenger’s bag and Jazz had a rucksack on. As soon as they exited the car Jazz appeared to start texting. A few seconds later the lights above the entrance flickered and there was a small explosion, as if a light blew out, and Jazz put the phone away, the three walked into the building and Serenity counted the security, “Five on the main door, two behind the tills.” She whispered to Daniel as they walked casually across the polished Marble floor. The Building was a large and important bank that currently had around $25’000 in it’s vault.
The three walked up to the teller and Jazz was up front, “How may I help you?” the teller asked
“I’d like to make a cash withdrawal.” He answered.
“Ok, how much would it be?” the Teller asked, typing on a computer in front of her
“Everything you’ve got.” Jazz answered. The teller gave him a strange look, as if to say ‘what the fuck?!?’ and Jazz responded by pulling out his revolver and resting it on the counter, pointing it at the Bank Teller. The Teller went wide eyed and Daniel span round, he pulled out a 9mm pistol and pointed at the crowd, “Everyone hit the ground” He shouted across the room, his voice echoing due to the marble interior. All the people in the room dived to the ground accept for Jazz, who was still resting his gun on the counter and Daniel as he watched the crowd. The two guards from behind the Till ran towards them readying their gun, but Jazz simply shot them through the glass, the High calibre round going straight through the skull of one of them making blood and skull fragments splatter from the wound, the guard flopping to the ground and sliding across the room into the opposing room due to his momentum and the marble flooring. The round had also grazed the other guard’s side as he tried to dive out of the way behind cover, the guard landed behind a desk, disappearing from view.
The five guards from the entrance ran into the room and opened fire on Daniel and Jazz. The two jumped behind some desks for cover and returned fire. The injured guard stood up shakily and stumbled over to Jazz and Daniel from behind, due to the fire fight the two had not seen him, and he was planning to take out at least one of them in a surprise attack. The Guard raised his 9mm and aimed it the back of Daniel’s head. Daniel, who had not seen the guard, kept shooting at the guards by the entrance, one of his bullets penetrated a guard’s chest and struck his heart, the Guard went limp and flopped back against the wall, sliding down it, leaving a blood smudge on the marble as he went into a sitting position.
The Guard who had snuck up behind Daniel squeezed the trigger of his gun and shot a bullet at him. However Serenity, who had been on the floor in the crowd had quickly gotten to her feet, drawn a sword and positioned the blade in front of the barrel of the guard’s gun, the bullet parrying off the blade. Serenity then span and switched her grip on the sword so she was holding it back hand and slashed the back of the guards right knee making him fall to the ground on his back, she stood a foot on top of him and stabbed the blade of her sword through his forehead. She pulled out the blade and got a back-spray of Blood on her top. She inspected the blade and saw that she actually had brain matter coating the end of it; She repulsed, almost throwing up, and wiped the blade off on the guard’s jacket.
Daniel looked behind him and noticed the dead guard, he shook his head and then he and Jazz shot the last of the guards. Daniel walked up to Serenity and shouted at her, the two argued for a few minutes and eventually Jazz came over and reminded them why they were here. Daniel and Serenity nodded before the three headed into the back and, After grabbing the Teller and threatening her, Serenity punched in the code for the vault and it opened. Jazz took the rucksack off his back, he and Serenity began loading it with cash notes. Daniel strolled over to the far wall and attached several sticks of explosives to it, he then began to load cash notes into his, now empty messenger’s bag. Once they had filled the two bags with as much money as possible. They all stood by the vault door and blew out the far wall. They then ran out the hole in the wall, into the car and sped off into the distance before the police even arrived at the scene of the crime.
Comments: 12
draconianknight [2009-09-25 18:22:34 +0000 UTC]
interesting....very interesting. I liked the action parts. ^.^ nice start of a new story.
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dmalac In reply to draconianknight [2009-09-25 18:28:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks
out of curiosity what do you mean interesting?
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draconianknight In reply to dmalac [2009-09-25 18:31:21 +0000 UTC]
<.<......>.> um.....^.^ I'm not that sure about what I mean by interesting. I usually find things interesting without knowing exactly why. I just find this really interesting. *smiles*
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dmalac In reply to draconianknight [2009-09-25 18:58:22 +0000 UTC]
trust me, It'll get more interesting. Alot more interesting once I introduce the Dietys and sigils.
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dmalac In reply to draconianknight [2009-09-25 19:29:52 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I'm actually writing chapter two as we speak. litterally
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dmalac In reply to draconianknight [2009-09-25 19:47:48 +0000 UTC]
lol
they take a while to write though. so it might not be up till tomorrow or sunday.
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