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Published: 2006-04-13 09:35:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 13182; Favourites: 178; Downloads: 1028
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Eah another two cards ...this time unfinsjed so you guys can say what you would change to make them better.one on the left is very raw .
any way left one is beach stuff.... right one supose to be night dress cocktailparty kinda theme ..which is hard for me. since im anisocial bastard .
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wow 12 cool good on ya dude, make the cash
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haha thanks old buddy ....i just finished taht set of 12 cards a week ago . now im a rich man
NANANA NA NA NAaaaaa
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wow 12 cool good on ya dude, make the cash
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i like them both... the girl in the beach... her hair needs shadow ... but wow your amazing ....
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wow, it's awesome to see youe style in a much cleaner oriantation
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the one on the right could use more dark colours like black or red to bring out this sexy night life thingy, perhaps curly lines like that of a woman's figure ! (just a suggestion)
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welcome ! i love your works ! by the way are you working ??
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thats my work ...i do greating cards for small company
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thats really great ! don't worry , you'll make your mark someday !
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im not woried ...i know that i will
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it's very interesting to see you "mainstream" your style. As for improvement, I don't know. They're already cool. Maybe use more solid shading?
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Intresting for you ...sad for me . but anyway its just makes me stronger illustrator.
eah more shading more atrrens and decraive things. in 6 months remind me you adress ill send you some good ones ..when tehy gona get printed
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linking park such an emo kids
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man i like these.
I'm fine with the left one being left raw.
The right one is my favorate of the 2 but
it looks like it could be more finished.
Maybe a deeper background.
whatever, you know what you're doing.
Her hair is fucking nice.
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maybe some sort of art neuveau border on the cocktail party one...lens flare on the beach one? 's all i got.
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Bigger boobs for the left one. The one at the right is perfect.
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i dont think you need to change anything, i think the sand colour is fine as it gives the impression of it being a sunny day, i think that both girls look like a couple of hotties so thats a plus 
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still ill have to make more decoratons and detailsfor there costumes ..to make it look modern and such.
and talking baout amature ...my bos reali like glittern and stuff so we wil lse how the come ount in the end
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ahh so its for a client? then yeah youll definately have to glam it up a bit
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что это с тобой стало....?????0_0
ты что то отошел от привычного образа фигурных дам!
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ну яж это за денги делаю ...мне босс сказл что мои бабы вгылят тостыми и старыми .
А денишку то хчоется бедному студенту тачто рисую худых баб за данги ..а моих баб для себя
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Твой бабы не толстые, твои девушки реальные! Ненавижу этих худющих однообразных уродок !
На твоих девушек смотреть мне гораздо больше нра, хотя парой меня иногда смущает их пышная грудь!
Какой то комплекс неполноценности у мя прям развивается
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давай фотки шли ...луше кнаечно в нескольких ракурсах ...у меня мыло на галвной странцие написно .
у меня каникулы такчто нарисую
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хорошо
а я тем. более ждать буду!
Един. пожелание что нить в вамп. стиле
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вамп стиль это как? уточни ...дай примеры ..я чёнить такое рсиую?
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все как обычно, мрачно, черный бархат и кровь
вампиры и вино в бокале
хотя твой дарк хайтек мне тоже нра....!тебе решать!
один словам чтобы это было чертовски мрачно и божественно красиво
ага, эко я губу расскатала
ps фотки пришли????
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окей я примрн отак и думал ...
фоти кпришли ...ты прсото супер ..мне даже гламурировать тебя не надо будет . сасибо
я пострасюсь
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я покраснела и вся в нетерпении результата
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яж тупое жывотное ....мне попы да сиски большые подовай ..я рад когда девушкам нарица тчо я рисую ..спсибо.
я может на нетерпеливых проюсь на следущей неделе
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left:
make the sand bright shiny yellow the tree really powerfull green. also the swim ring thing needs more powerful colors. girl doesn´t need much work. but you oculd look what fashion in bahtingclothes is right now and also the glasses could use a bit of color hint + much darker glasses.
right:
make the dress look more like silk or something like that. plus you could also give the flower a little outline i think. also making the figure in whole brighter and the BG a bit darker.
i think that would be the way i´d go. don´t get me wrong, i don´t want to tell you how to work.
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eah i have to work on out fit details ...
tanks
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