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personal work , pic im working at the moment.any sugestion for background/enviroment?
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She could use a few scars, and maybe a toothpick or a long blade of grass sticking out of the corner of her mouth.Β Other than that, the design is pretty interesting, overall.Β As for the environment, maybe a seedy pub or a tavern entrance, like she's just walking in to get a drink and a bite to eat, perhaps?
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Probably give her a forest background with a few elven warriors lying around in disarray.
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Hey bro, someone stole your artwork. [link]
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You've made alot of great art. Just trying to pay you back
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i'd like to see you go with a natural setting as well. maybe mountains or a wooded area.
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Holy cow!!!! Impressive lineart and anatomy! Cool anime style too.
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Really quite enjoyable. I vote you go with one of the people suggesting natural settings- bamboo forest and jungle both sound good.
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this came up in a google search on oni. Awesome
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could you be more specific
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Hmm. For the background, since there's those hints of blue, standing beside a water source. Perhaps a lake or creek -- she could have a mount drinking from the water and she's keeping an eye out for potential enemies or an ambush.... Just a thought. I can't wait to see it finished.
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I like the offset of her hair to her skin and the stylized muscles...
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super hot oni woman! I suggest either a huge battlefield littered with her fallen enemies, or a hall full of excited oni men cheering her, the entertainment for the evening, on, (:
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This one has a really unique style. Feels really regal to me in a sense, so I think you should stick with that in the background. This feels more like a protective warrior than an offensive one, so she should be guarding something.
Also, I truly love that club. yes, I know it prolly out weighs me by a margin, but it would be darn fun to wield something with that much smashitude, which is now officially a word.
Smashingly and fearfully yours,
Theo
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Happened to find a page of your "Peach" strip elsewhere. Wow! One of a kind! Your art is simply amazing and you are going to famously successful. One small criticism: minimize the text baloons. Fewer words and let your pictures do the talking.
And with that . . . good luck!
p.s. Where can we find more? Do you have an on-line/storefront distributor?
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THIS is the one nice Black woman character that i have seen please dont ruin her with meat, cave, bones, sculls, boold or any of that NASTY CRAP.
GLORYFY HER, Maybe dark flames (black, soft in bkg) Nice graudian monster/s (clean design not to bulky)
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Glad to see someone did a clean high quality (anatomy as well) design Black woman character.
It like finding, i dont know...something that cant be found!
BEAUTIFUL
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inside a public mens restroom......i dunno
anyways....i've never seen this one, so is IT missing something or is this all we're gunna get?
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Wow. Immediately one of my favorites as far as recently seen original drawn girls. *Glances at gallery* Yeah... you're definitely now watched.
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brilliant i think it needs a forest background and some animal furs
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awesomeness...and fer the bg...i gotz nuffen...
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nice, I like the club design
I suggest a burning forrest for the background or something on fire. looks like something should be burning
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A torch lit hallway with the pungent stench of mildew emanating from the crumbling stone walls.
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ΡΡ.. ΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈ ΠΊΠ»Π΅Π²ΡΠ΅! ΠΏΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ°ΠΉ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΠ°ΡΡ, ΠΊΠ»Π΅Π²ΡΠΉ ΡΡΠΈΠ»Ρ ΠΏΠΎΠΊΡΠ°ΡΠΊΠΈ
ΡΠ΅Π»ΡΡ!
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Can't wait to see her finished!! Although maybe I would have loved a full body picture... but no real critic. Maybe I'd add some shimenawa somewhere. On the mace, or on the legs, maybe?
Just my thought...
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Her coloring is very stark with a limited pallette (which I love by the way, very evocative) I think the BG should be and equally limited pallette, but either highly contrasting (opposite side of color wheel) or one hue off (beside on color wheel). Either making her stand out from it or blend with it.
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a skinned goat would be nice, maybe some dried hearts curing for sausage meat.... a couple random poles and and some cave paintings
of mammoths mating
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ΠΎ Ρ Π²Π»ΡΠ±ΠΈΠ»Π°ΡΡ......ΡΠ΅ΡΡ ΠΏΡΠΎΡΡΠΎ ΡΠΈΠΊΠ°ΡΠ½Π°!
ΠΌΠΎΠΉ Π»ΡΠ±ΠΈΠΌΡΠΉ ΡΠΈΠΏ ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΡΠΈΠ½!
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If the favorite isn't a clue, I'm going to be blunt, I love what you've got here and I hope that you manage to put in the time and energy to finish this. I love what I see so far, keep it coming.
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Thanks , i usualy ingnore favs ,deleat them strait away . Coments its what counts.
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Go with something unexpected, like a shopping mall, or the neighborhood pool, high school prom...
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ummm, im going to go with jungle... or perhaps desert... OR if you have ever seen futurama you could put smiling skeletons with broken hip bones from that Amazonia episode.
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that was my first thought.
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