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Published: 2017-02-12 03:21:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 642; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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I have no idea how this page is out, this is a weird page, and it shows on the line style around it, this page has been made and remade a couple of times, there is no big fight on this one, the more I thought about it, the less made sense that they got in a physical fight (for now) without any kind of reason, Vannesa might be aggressive but that was just plain not good, the other reason is because I'm at a moment when I'm thinking if I should keep doing art, I honestly believe I'm not good at this, so I'm trying to remove everything I do to make my art "look" better like the thick and violent lines like in the first part and I'm starting to see a lot of mistakes, more that I'm willing to admit, next pages will be shorter and probably a two-parter
Yes I know I said I would upload it flat, but I couldn't I didn't liked how it looked like.
But for some positive aspects, hey look I made her explanation as a nurse joy in a single panel instead of two full comics
That Vase on Sara's table is a Dragnor dinasty vase and is expensive :V
I really liked the crayon style panels
I will change a bit the things on Alisa's side
I'm adding some crayon pages containing the other rival (name still not ready, you like Eli, Pacifica or Chelsea?)
On other stuff I'm going to put some of the older tags I have around
Characters Stolen Lent
Sara by Krisantyne
you can read the previous one here
it has a lot of grammar mistakes :V
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XDDD that Magikapr guy XDDD
"don't break anything" -> I don't promise anything XDDDD
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I swear is a conspiracy, everytime I play rby I fall in his trap :V
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I died
Sara as the Magikarp salesman is the funniest thing I've ever seen
Damn, the best Magikarp is gone now, but I'll gladly take the other 100.
What weird experiments is Professor Jen doing in her lab, it looks very ominous on top of the mountain
Vanna and Alisa's auras are clashing very hard. :'D I wonder what it is that innately makes them enemies. The style of the flashback is really cool and fitting btw.
Baby Sara!! ;v; And then the Goldeen suddenly evolved into a 3m long Seaking and many people fell into the water that day.
It makes me sad that you're sad about your art because there are so many good things about it. ;A;
So much effort and details in the environments (I see those little Pokémon in the city shot and the Rijon badges on the dresser!!)
Interesting looking dialogue scenes due to the varied angles, frames and body language
The color atmospheres that I comment about every time :V
I love that you always draw ambitious things, and while some things still look rough around the edges, that's much better than someone who for example draws people perfectly but every scene looks the same because they don't even try anything new.
So yeah don't give up pls
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I had that on my todo list, I think it was from a comment glad you liked it
Welllllllllll in theory all the karps are from Sara therefore are yours
Is just a research facility XD I copied the style from one in london
Enemies I tell you, is the [spoilers] *************************************************************************************[spoilers], thanks! next page is going to be in that style but is an extra page
and now the rest of the story is complete
Perhaps is just what happens when you get old and realize you aren't where you want to be, I honestly need more discipline, I can't sit down to practice what I should be practicing and then I complain about how my art looks bad when I don't practice anything, and yes exactly is that what I want to be able to push out those things different colors, styles and lines but if my basic formation is bad everything will result in this not good but not bad stuff which I'm not happy with, adding that I'm a highly critical with myself isn't helping either, for now I'm trying to take new hobbies to get away a bit from this, still wanting to add practice hours into art, but since all of that is boring and repetitive my brain looks the way to skip it, so I'm trying to figure out what is going on and how I could change that, so in the mean time I'll try to keep drawing by force
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I'm swimming in karps yesssss
Oh I see, so the other scientists just don't like Professor Jen because she stole their lunch money.
Gosh, the static on the internet line is terrible today.
Thanks for the reminder to cherish what is left of my youth :')
How are you trying to practice, filling sketch pages with exercises or something? I could never do that, I teach myself new things when they're needed for a drawing I have to do anyway. It then takes forever to do that drawing, but my soul doesn't die. Probably not a good advice anyway.
And good plan, if art doesn't make you happy at the moment, you shouldn't spend all your time on it and also do something else for balance. ;v;
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