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dofaust — The Reader 3rd state
Published: 2017-12-26 20:08:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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...the reader's world is slowly improving.....just a small number of modifications this time...
.... much still remains to be added....
I have interiors, and some fine sunflowers/lilies/etc,
and gnarly boulders, a wider tableau, musical instruments,
incl a spinet, much art, and some signs of technology
and science...I wish a certain muse with fine skills
could augment or finish this... I proceed at a glacial pace...
I shall credit the collaborator presently...
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Comments: 14
I like this peice a lot, the colour and lighting are wonderful.
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Oh...I'm sure I de-activated it...
I'll put it back up if you like...?
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why did you that??! it's the best. I want it in my fav but looked uselessly for it a whole afternoon!
Please, let it back in your gallery?
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Here is my comment...( I use the Laurence's mouse...)
Maybe I should keep it for me....
I wonder if the symetry in your last version is a good idea? It seems artificial a bit?
I regret the right part of your first work. With the new razed castle, the marine skyline has lost its depth and mystery. Why did you cut it? Is it just a stage?
Would you come back to the first version? The "cave" was very appropriate to the reader/philosopher... Not the "plein air".
Just my feeling. I'm not the Oracle....
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Yes, this is just a intermediate stage...
I'm pondering what to have on the stone cliff on the right...
I agree about the need for more that will make the
sea more attractive, etc....
I love the idea of a cave!
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I wrote this last comment without watching again your work: it was pretentious...My visual memory is not faithful anymore...
Why did I have the impression that the "castle"( what you call a cliff? ) was higher? You didn't touch it! Anyway, I miss the line of the sea, on the right, at the skyline. Do you see what I mean?
Why did I have the remember of a cave on the left? The shadow, I suppose. The contrast between the right ( lightened) and the left was very good, really good! So, I regret your new open space on the left.. I'm SURE that your first reader environment was the best!
( Lulie's said: " he must take away his glasses! " She might be right...)
If you get this comment, I'll know that it has left........
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You are so right re the need for the sea on the right!
And, I mentioned that I like the idea of a noticable cave....
...that bit of darkness behind the reader will be god for that...
...and, I can suggest somethin inside the cave...
the left is rather unfinished... a separate landscape...
...probably with yet another reader comfortably
settled (standing) - still reading! ...or using a keyboard
Take off the glasses? I certainly could...do you like that
change to the reader?
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I spent a long time watching your work...
If you persist in this composition, you'll have to move a bit your reader on the left, .. He's really too geometrically placed in the middle of the work, i think.
I would paint this work, I would heighten the cliff, in order to hide the sealine, too close to the
cliff, which summit is too parallel to the sea. The devil take me if I manage to be understood..
Tell me if I don't keep my own business...
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I tried to send a comment about your new "Reader". Impossible. I'm going to try to send this line...
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