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dollyache — Weeping Iris
Published: 2003-12-03 17:11:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 38; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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I wrote this yesterday, first thing ive written in months... not too shabby but also pretty crap, might fiddle with it later. Some people who know me will know what this is about. . . . .Related content
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Wow, I really like this, mainly because I can relate in a way.
"That way,
that you looked at me,
will haunt me for eternity.
That smirk evermore,
As an inprint in my brain."
That stanza is so emotional (from my perspective)... Amazing how I can relate to this, and you put it in words, when I can't even describe it.
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not wanting to jump to any conclusions, but isd everything cool? poetry scares me, it's too inexplicit, you have to make up your own mind as to the meaning, and you know what my mind is like.
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lol no worrys, its in the past... that lil bastards gonna pay though....i mean lalala happiness and sunshine.
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Oh I really like that. It was sad though but very heart touching. Great job.
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