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DominoMix — In The Lab (Q XReader)
Published: 2013-07-27 02:08:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1159; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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In The Lab (Q XReader)It's just another day in the lab.. Q and (F/N) were working on some gadgets. Soon Bond walks in and walks over to Q and asks.. "did you tell her you like her yet kid".. Q shakes his head and blushes a bit.. whilst running his fingers through his dark curley hair "not yet Bond.. but i was just thinking about it now" Bond chuckles "well kid you really don't want to see her with Paul do you.." Q is annoyed at this "no... no i don't want to see that bond.." bond chuckles again " well go ask her out then... go on.." bond nudges Q over towards (F/N).. Q nods and Bond leaves... Q walks over to (F/N) which she was working on a missile gun " hey (F/N) .. i was wondering " Q blushes "would you go out with me... i kinda like you for awhile but didn't wanna say anything" shock at this you say "YES.. I actually happen to like you too Q" Q smiles like a Cheshire cat "i'll pick you up at 8pm then" he winks as he walks out the door... not waiting for an answer and your night goes brilliantly.. so you carry on dating....
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While I've never seen these movies... which is a tragedy in itself. I'd say this is a good start, but I have a few suggestions??
1. LAYOUT- It's one really big block of text and I remember when I started out that's how all mine looked, but I eventually realized that it was really hard to read so I started spacing things out. If you want an example just check out one of my fics...
2. DETAIL- Describe everything... pretend like people have absolutely no idea what they are looking at. remember the five senses and roll with it... from the quiet whine of an air conditioner to the slight scent of someone's cologne or perfume.
3. CHARACTER- Keep in mind the characters you're using and their personalities... like I said, I've never seen any of the Bond movies... (something I'm hoping to remedy soon) but even the reader can have thoughts and may even decide to play hard to get...
Don't really know how much feed back you wanted... but this is what I got to give you Dom... Hope you don't mind!
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Hey Domino is it alright if I expand on this story
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um... a ok... but say its mine...
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