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Published: 2009-10-18 15:24:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 7007; Favourites: 243; Downloads: 110
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How longcan i lament
with this depressed
heart and soul
how long
can i remain
a sad autumn
ever since my grief
has shed my leaves
the entire space
of my soul
is burning in agony
how long can i
hide the flames
wanting to rise
out of this fire
how long can one suffer
the pain of hatred
of another human
a friend behaving like an enemy
with a broken heart
how much more
can i take the message
from body to soul
i believe in love
i swear by love
believe me my love
how long
like a prisoner of grief
can i beg for mercy
you know i'm not
a piece of rock or steel
but hearing my story
even water will become
as tense as a stone
if i can only recount
the story of my life
right out of my body
flames will grow
Poetry by: Sidi & Mawlana Jalalu Al Din Al Rumi.
Resources:
Special thanks for mademoiselle Aevicen Destiny Borrowing me her umbrella. it is a 3D umbrella rendered and built in sl.
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Comments: 79
Thank you!! it means a lot to me u like it.
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Well I don't know why I hadn't stopped by your gallery before this, sometimes my mind just doesn't click right I'm afraid, but yes I do like your work a lot!
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I am really glad a great photo manipulator like you says that 
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I'm very glad, I've been so inspired by others here and it makes me feel good to know I've been able to pay it back in small way!
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Well if you ever have any questions I'll be happy to try and answer them..
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well if u are ready for a lot of questions
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Ha ha send 'em on over and I'll do my best to answer them!
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Thank you! I am so sorry for late respond. my computer have been crashed.
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Thank you!! sorry for late respond. my computer crashed in rl and i am on another one now
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thank u pepey, so sorry for late respond
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aww the poem complements the piece beautifully 
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thank u, i am really glad u liked it
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you're so welcome!
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thank u ~monsterrrrous i am glad you have been touched by it, since i was emotionally involved while i was creating this art piece. Especially it comes from a good artist like your self.
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I like it. its very tactile, the kind of stuff i like to make.. good job
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thank u ~thescreamingid you have quite a good gallery your self
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That is absolutely incredible; very well-done. ;D
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That's great! It looks like an old oil painting^^
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thank u ~persuastrix glad u like it
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I like it, it's awesome how we can feel the movement of the wind with your line.
NICE WORK !
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This is quite a good point, you could feel the movement in the image. 
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Wonderful; captures well for me the feeling of loneliness and impending doom!
Featured in my latest Journal, Spread Some DA Love, Part XV -- [link]
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I am very happy u featured me. It is a late thank u but i am sure u will forgive me, my reason behind my late communication is me being busy in making the november article of best of photo manipulation
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I really love the scratches in the background.
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