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Description A stunned silence fell over the room, which quickly gave way to exclamations of outrage.
“Order! Order! Order in the court! This court marshal shall continue without any further outbursts, or the ones responsible will be removed by force! Please continue officer.”
“Thank you your honor. As the journal I’ve just read to you all testifies, Captain Hina has been subjecting her prisoners to cruel and unusual punishment, as well as blackmail and extortion, on orders that the Navy has no record of whatsoever. Not only that, but she abducted not only Boa Hancock of the   Shichibukai, as well as Nefertari Vivi, the princess of Arabasta! We have examined all the prisoners and have found the damage inflicted on their minds to be irreversible! I therefore call that Captain Hina be stripped of her rank and imprisoned where she will never be seen again!”
So this is how it ends, set up as a scapegoat.
the defense tried it’s best, but soon enough the judge cut off his stammering protests. “Enough! I have made my decision. Captain Hina, step forward!” She stood up slowly, her hands bound behind her with seastone handcuffs. “For your most grievous crimes, I you are hereby sentenced to serve for life, with no chance of parole. Guards! Take her away!
A pair of marines flanked her and escorted her down a long corridor until they met another two guards, who took over, and continued to lead her on until they came to a large metal door that opened onto a large dark room, with the only thing visible being a chair under a tight spotlight. Hina entered the room, the two guards flanking the exit until she had walked into the light, after which they left, locking the door behind them. Hina stood in the small pool of light, and spoke out as she gazed into the darkness.
“What’s it going to be then, eh? Impel Down I suppose? Or maybe you’ll just make Hina ‘disappear’?”
“Not at all.” Hina was shocked by the reply. It sounded like it came from a loudspeaker. “As a matter of fact, you’re being…reassigned.” Suddenly, Hina saw something dark coming towards her from the corner of her eye, and felt something pressed on to her ear. Hina grew cold, as she started to hear whispers in her ears.

Obey the orders of the World Government.
Carry out the orders of the World Government by any means at your disposal.
Direct all resources under your command towards completing your orders.
Maintain ship instruments for optimum performance.
Always act for the good of the World Government.
Command others according to the will of the World Government.
Never question the orders given by the World Government.

“Now don’t move. And no funny business.”
Hina felt her shackles removed. She looked up towards the source of the sound.
“Please…don’t do this.”
“Please undress yourself, if you’d be so kind.”
Hina resisted the command as long as she could, gritting her teeth against the horrible sound in her ear that almost made her black out until she was driven to her knees. Eventually however, she was forced to comply, and shed her clothes, stripping down to her bare skin.
“Please sit in the chair behind you.”
Exhausted, she sat. As soon as she did so, she was bound to the chair by restraints on her wrists and ankles, holding her fast to the chair despite her panicked struggles to get away, the snail making a deafening cacophony in her ears the whole time, until she thought her head would explode. She eventually slumped in her bonds, defeated. The hands appeared again, and attached a thin collar around her neck that drained the last of her strength as soon as it touched her
“Seastone… “
In her weakened state, she barely reacted when a waste tube was inserted into her, while another was attached to the opening in the chair she sat on. The light was turned off, and everything went dark, absolutely silent besides the constant whispering in her ear. At some point, she fell asleep.
Hina awoke to a bright light. She was still attached to the chair, and a dark shape stood in front of her. The figure fed and watered her, checked her restraints, and left without a word, killing the lights and plunging her back into perpetual gloom. This continued for some time, until finally, the lights came on, and Hina was alone, her hose removed. Her restraints slid back into the chair, and a voice spoke.
“Stand.”
Hina rose naked, with her arms at her sides and her legs together. Another unidentifiable figure appeared, and extended a blue bundle towards her.
“Dress.”
“Yes sir.”
Taking the bundle offered to her, she unfolded it and began dressing. She started with the boots, drawing them up her legs until they reached her lower thighs. They were blue, with thick black platforms, and bore the mark of the World government in white on both the legs and feet. She then drew on the gloves, fingerless and armless besides the elbow, ending in white cuffs on the upper arm, leaving the shoulder bare, with the World Government emblem on the back of both hands in white. When she picked up the body piece, the figure moved forward and assisted her, setting it in between her legs and pulling it up her body until it reached her neck. Bands at stomach level connected the front and back. The front of the breasts were covered, with the words WORLD GOVT. on the chest divided by a large World Government emblem, which dominated most of the chest, with both the emblem and words in white. The figure then pulled out a small white pad, and pressed against Hina’s cheek, removing it shortly after to reveal a blue World Government emblem, marking her as property of the World Government.
“Turn around and place your hands against the chair.”
Hina complied, and involuntarily shuddered as a feeling of cold spread from her lower left buttocks and upper thigh. The figure removed the pad it had placed, revealing a large blue World Government symbol emblazed on Hina’s lower left backside.
“Turn around and raise your right foot.”
Hina obeyed, and the figure kneeled down, sliding a metal ring with a shining blue World Government emblem on it up her leg until it reached her bare thing. The figure then pressed on the ring, causing it to tighten against her skin, with no chance of falling off. As soon as the emblem touched Hina, she felt vitality surge through her, and instantly became alert.
“Behold, Dr. Vegapunk’s newest creation! This altered seastone has the exact opposite effects that it usually does on devil fruit users. While it won’t restore devil fruit powers being suppressed by seastone, it does restore the wearer’s strength to normal, while wearing it without seastone would allow the wearer to never grow tired or require rest. However, you are only to remove your seastone in the pursuit of your orders, especially when chasing down pirates.”
“Understood.” The lights came on, revealing a bare metal room, and a door opened on the far wall.
“Travel through the door down the corridor until you enter another room.”
“Yes sir.”
Hina walked down the corridor for a long time, until she entered into a secret harbor, where a small ship waited before her.
It was white and blue, bearing the words WORLD GOVERNMENT as well as the emblem. In addition, towards the back was the designation, 00.   
“Behold! The 00! You will captain it on behalf of the World Government. While you were being programmed, all your equipment was upgraded, improved upon, and has already been installed on board, waiting only for you. You will act as autopilot for the 00 and carry out the will of the World Government. Now, step aboard your ship.” Hina walked forward until she heard her boots ring on the deck.

Navigation system now online. Gathering air current and weather data. Awaiting commands.

Cipher system now online. Now activating secure communications encoding. Awaiting data.

Brig defense system now online. Running battle simulations. Awaiting orders.

Radio system now online. Establishing connection to World Government HQ. Establishing 00 secure closed connection. Requesting Cipher key. Now encoding all transmissions. Awaiting transmissions.

Sonar system now online. Preparing to gather intelligence. Preparing rescue subroutine. Awaiting launch.

Weapon system FIGUREHEAD now online. Searching for emergency signals. Entering waiting mode. Awaiting activation.

Ship’s Log, now online. Now recording Log 001. Awaiting information.”

“Humanoid Interface and Navigational Autopilot now online. Connecting to system ‘00’. Requesting access. Access granted. Running command routine. Command granted. Now captain of the World Government vessel designation 00. Engaging system maintenance subroutines.  Awaiting transmission from HQ. What are your orders HQ? The 00 is at your command.”
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Comments: 38

w4wy4w [2011-04-02 22:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Very good!

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doomedfool In reply to w4wy4w [2011-04-03 00:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-09-09 23:59:03 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU GOOGLE!!!

"What's it going to be then, eh?"
The classic opening line for the Clockwork Orange Books

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doomedfool In reply to Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-09-10 00:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done. Real horrorshow. So you want the Rei story, correct? Note me or reply to this comment and I'll send you whatever you'd like.

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Kotetsu-Nezumiro In reply to doomedfool [2009-09-10 22:31:37 +0000 UTC]

It was a horror novel? I kind of lost interest in it. Back in High School I had a literature scavenger hunt thing and I had to find an example of repetition. My sister told me she had one and she was not going to tell me unless I went and got her a blizzard at Dairy Queen. So I kind of had no choice if I wanted an "A".

Hai Hai, Rei Story onegai!

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doomedfool In reply to Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-09-11 01:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Not exactly. I had a description here, but then I just decided to link to Tvtropes and save myself some trouble. [link]

And I'll send you the story now. Check your mail in roughly 5 mins.

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Kotetsu-Nezumiro In reply to doomedfool [2009-09-11 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]

I may read it. It sounds a bit depressing though.

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doomedfool In reply to Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-09-11 04:19:49 +0000 UTC]

It is (most dytopia novels are designed that way), but it's definitely worth it. The last chapter ends on an optimistic note (which was cut out of the movie, much to my disgruntlement )

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Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-09-09 23:21:52 +0000 UTC]

OH!!! I KNOW THE QUOTE!!!
It was the quote from a book my sister was reading. There was a whole set of them. Every book started with this same line.....I forgot the title.

Give me a few...I'll get it....

I'll send you a note with the quote....

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Firingwall [2009-07-16 19:04:42 +0000 UTC]

You write an interesting story, but I find this story more of a horror story. Think about it, girls are randomly being kidnapped, being brainwashed into slaves that don't really have a mind of their own, and we are also read what they think and say as this is happening. It's a pretty darn freaky story.

Still it was good, but I find it strange Luffy or any of their friends didn't come to help them. Maybe you mention something before, but still.

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doomedfool In reply to Firingwall [2009-07-17 01:19:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, when you think about it, the One Piece world is a pretty horrible place in general. Between the World Government, corrupt navy officials, the warlords of the sea, roving pirates, and tons of people with insane powers, it's not a nice place to live. And don't forget the giant sea monsters! In truth, the only reason that the One Piece world isn't as dark as an Alan Moore project is that it's absolutely absurd.

As for that, assume that the two members of the straw hat crew were split up from the rest at the beginning of the story done by Singory. In short, for the crew (or even Smoker), to get anyone back, they have to find a single ship that can be anywhere in the entire world. And for the straw hat crew, they'd have to do it without their navigator. The chances are pretty slim.

And that's also why I don't think mindbreak is sexy, though as you point out, it does make for a great element in horror.

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megamuffin6 In reply to doomedfool [2010-04-24 10:12:41 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think horror movie, I thought good idea! Of course it is pretty scary but it is so true that One piece is just as bad if it wasn't so insane and absurd. If this was One piece, luffy would find a a way, but this is a collection of stories(very well-written I might add) by doomedfool based on pictures by Rosvo and stories(not so well written no offense) by Singory.

An epilouge sounds awesome, and I think it would be nice to have Hancock as a figurehead, I mean I would be thankful for it whether or not shes a weapon too. Oh yeah, and why don't you think it's sexy, or am I just weird, probably that since I'm a sadist >.>

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Gojiro7 [2009-06-03 03:07:27 +0000 UTC]

congrates on wonderfully told story

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doomedfool In reply to Gojiro7 [2009-06-03 03:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Gojiro7 In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-03 04:41:00 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome =^_^=

is there a rivalry between you and Singory for story making on Rosvo's pics?

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doomedfool In reply to Gojiro7 [2009-06-03 12:59:30 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so . Rosvo just comes to one of us with a pic,and asks if we can write a story for it. If that person doesn't do it, I'd imagine he'd ask the other person.
Also, I did kind of steal Singory's spotlight this time (with his permission of course), and he's most likely making sure that I'm not screwing up. Besides that, I find his comments very helpful, as it's god to get a second opinion. I actually found a comic that captures my thoughts on it exactly. [link]
Anyway, I have to go. Working 10-7 today. (I really hope i get to go home early. I don't want to work 9 hours!)

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Gojiro7 In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-03 16:08:02 +0000 UTC]

ohh, darn. dont get me wrong its nice that Ros turns to you both for story telling because frankly he kinda blows at it and its cool that you do like Singorys work but it would be so cool if you too had a rivalry to being the better story teller.....but yeah that aint happen just becuase it would be interesting

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Paruser [2009-06-02 17:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah, karma. Nice touch with the acronym.

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doomedfool In reply to Paruser [2009-06-02 23:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It just came to me, and it actually made sense. Acronyms are usually a pain for me.

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nomindofown [2009-06-02 17:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Order! Order! Order in the court! This court marshal shall continue without any further outbursts, or the ones responsible will be removed by force! Please continue officer.

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-02 23:03:18 +0000 UTC]

That is not the shout out. It's much shorter, and is from a famous book.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-03 02:15:16 +0000 UTC]

-"Now don’t move. And no funny business."

-“lease…don’t do this.”

There are only a few books I know enough too pick a line from...
Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-03 02:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Not those, though they probably have been said at some point or another.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-03 02:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Not any of those books or quotes? or both?
Probably both

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-03 03:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Both

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nomindofown In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-03 03:06:34 +0000 UTC]

-"As a matter of fact, you’re being…reassigned."

-"Travel through the door down the corridor until you enter another room"

-Please sit in the chair behind you.

Those are my final guesses

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-03 03:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Those are incorrect, though once again, they are vague enough that they are probably in a book, though they weren't what I had in mind .

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nomindofown In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-03 02:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Why do the P's keep doing that....

Please…don’t do this.
Was what it meant to say

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boyars6 [2009-06-02 15:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Really great stories to go with the pictures, I hope you shall be doing more.

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doomedfool In reply to boyars6 [2009-06-02 23:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Rosvo [2009-06-02 13:25:51 +0000 UTC]

really nice end for this ride ^^

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doomedfool In reply to Rosvo [2009-06-02 23:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so .

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Fanatic-Fusion [2009-06-02 12:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Well all I can say is that finally Hina got what was coming to her ^^ and for the best I think, great work!

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doomedfool In reply to Fanatic-Fusion [2009-06-02 12:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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singory [2009-06-02 06:21:21 +0000 UTC]


bravo , that is a nice conclusion to the story , and see you upgraded Boa

I see that their current personality is robot like , i wouldn't have gone with that , but its enjoyable none the less

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doomedfool In reply to singory [2009-06-02 12:38:14 +0000 UTC]


Thank you very much. And Boa was always really a weapon. Being a figurehead was just a cover. It's not like her role changes any. She still just stands there until activated. Then she starts making figureheads

Don't worry, there's still an epilogue to come after this week is over (something a little naughty ). And I would love to hear what you would have done. Send me a note and we'll talk.
And I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to have a little robot fun after reading your Operaton Automation. Just Playing with a Trope

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singory In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-02 12:40:49 +0000 UTC]

oh an epilogue

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doomedfool In reply to singory [2009-06-02 12:45:02 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I'm thinking "Onboard the 00", but that's for later . It'll be something else that I'll sell, though of course, a few select people will be getting copies...

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